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i like the beat.. delivery is pretty good.. lyrics were so-so... the storyline was excellent tho lol.. good shyt man
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Thanx for the feed homie
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i like that beat also [lemme know if you'd be willing to hook me up with it]. Lyrically it could have been better, but overall it was a solid track. You told the story real well, and you rode the beat pretty well. delivery was good, and you had some emotion in it. Sometimes, in my opinion, its better to express the story or whatever, than to have a crazy lyrical verse. [but yours were still above average]

anyways, good shit. stay up and keep dropin. oh yeah, and is that a true story?
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I really liked this the story was amazing. I'd like to hear more stuff like this.
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