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Paparazzi

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Theoretic genocide, body parts and inventive types
Doctor Jekyll's Mrs. Hydes, bracelet pesticides
push the pest aside, move past me and tend to lie
she's stretchin' life, light's overprotective riiight?
sure you can be the next to shine, standin' fresh n fly
dissectin' errythin' we represent, we live stackin' presidents
just to lift smiles botox elements, but ur slow lost elegance
defects the defense, in essence sense...is lost gone with the wind
so whenever the problems end, you stay with what thought's will trend
lackin' inner beauty n postive-ness...smelt decent fragrance lost all common sense
u could get mad bashin' those broads, seen downtown flashin' cho cha
maybe it's just how bad girls go wrong, exit stage left reflection? nope...GONE

I just got that Lady Gaga Paparazzi instrumental....hence the reason I wrote this...LoL!

I'm not done but I think I'ma do this ish for a mixtape joint

-- Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:38 pm --

I still think this deserves some love....HELLLO PEOPLE
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QZ, the fact that you said Lady GaGa pretty much did it for me. LOL. Can't get past the fact you posted to GaGa's instrumental. Talk about diverisity. LOL

But in regards to the post, How does the title fit the context of the verse? Enlighten me so I can properly critique this.
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Re: Paparazzi

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I'm your biggest fan
I'll follow you until you love me, papa-paparazzi
baby, there's no other superstar
you know that I'll be your papa-paparazzi
promise I'll be kind, but I won't stop until that boy is mine
baby you'll be famous, chase you down until you love me
papa-paparazzi

^^^^^^^^^^thats the hook

I flipped it from it's happy go lucky vibe....
did what I wanted to,....and so on...I had a explanation but I got logged out....shit sucks...take it how it is LoL
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Post by Ink. »

Lol the verse was alright. IMO yu kinda.. Iunno.. Lost it at the end... But was kinda coo... Lady gaga aside.

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shit had some hot lines in there tho...for real
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Re: Paparazzi

Post by Loon E Lou »

errything juumped of the tongue pretty ku. good read. id really like to peep this to that cock-a-razzi beat. the beat is still aight. ill neva hear the song the same if u bust to it. and thats a good thing. haha. ku for what it was dawg. i like
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Post by deafshady »

i feel all this, it is good read tho, i respect that, nuttin to change unless isee it n i ll say it, keep it up bro
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