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This shit is hella old.. This is like when i first learnt how to put a multi together... Well, around that time, when i finally started to understand how to write... If i can find my other pieces I'll post em up... Cant find the dopest ish i wrote though, I'll check AIM or something, some old heads might still got the shit.

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The Beginning…

A baffled Mythical warrior stands before the sinister gateway of hell….Searching for the ominous fruit which has devoured his mind…An image soon approaches, suggesting the reasons of his existence…..

Warrior…:
..Murdered-by-stakes, resurrection burned-by-the-hate…Times hands express the presence, turned-by-our-fate…
..I turned-to-the-gate, A dark figure emerged twisted-with-anger….All I vision-is-danger…Holocaust Fabricated with in the division-of-saviors…
..Desire of ancient fruits of the lotus-I’m-yearning …Lord noticed-my-turning….A long road ahead….Filled with dark thoughts of being hopeless-and-burning….
..So for death I stalk My-prey-on-a-mission…. Holding the cold steel…The Lord? Today-he-stops-liven…I was told it was written…For my fate-is-gon’-kill-him……
..Creep’d on the sanctified steps-of-Christ….Cocked the arrow back, but I missed-him-twice…Reached for my blade with clips-of-ice…But he rendered me useless...With-just-his-eyes…..
..The devil quickly leaped up in my conscience…And started filling-my-mind….Gripping just my fist and a mic, he told me these lines better hit-this-time
..Before accusing me of missing-on-purpose….My tongue swelled from the heat...Like sipping-a-furnace…..With these evil thoughts barley hitting-the-surface….

….The Presence of light…

Christ:..
..Ancient texts revealed this instance…Showed-descriptions, of the warrior thrown-through-fiction, posed with blades of misery …But even I foretold my own-crucifixion…
..Depictions, inscriptions…Of a feeble minded warrior attempting to kill-creations….Word of the mouth in ill-relations….text obscured with in the real-temptations…..
..I watched and awaited this rebel-induced-with-hate…Train as he infused-his-brain with iron…as the devil-produced-his-blade….
.. A weapon to eternally conceal-my-thoughts…A lone warrior trying to reveal-my-corpse…I defeated countless armies, But could one man alone possibly kill-my-force??

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hmmm interesting story line you got there Ink. The warrior awaits his fate as the savior provides him with refuge. I disagree with the story line (personal reasons), but I like how you put this together.

"..Desire of ancient fruits of the lotus-I’m-yearning …Lord noticed-my-turning….A long road ahead….Filled with dark thoughts of being hopeless-and-burning….
..So for death I stalk My-prey-on-a-mission…. Holding the cold steel…The Lord? Today-he-stops-liven…I was told it was written…For my fate-is-gon’-kill-him……" -- nice with the multies there..

you gonna start writing again and instead of reaching back in your treasure chest? :)
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Thanks for the feed fam. I'm kinda working on something now. Vocab aint as nice as back then. Maybe because I was in school back then?? Haha.

Understand where yu coming from though. Just wanted to do something.. Unique, different. That's my angle.

Might see something from me sooner rather then later.

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oh no!

is this who i think it is? lol Ink from Sixshot??
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Sixshot... Hmm.. Sounds hella familiar... Did i go as Noble? Or Ink.? Lol Would have had the same sig, rolled with dudes from HeavyHittahz?
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well the ink i'm thinking of actually goes by Inkspillz on Sixshot n Goldmic!! guess its a different guy!
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Anyways I really felt this Piece, nice shit dude!
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Inkspillz... Ahh, That aint me.... BUT I know I most def remember that name.. Fuck, I think I was on six shot. Cant remember for sure tho LOL. But thanks anyways Fam.
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