Bune vs quix

[Bune]

5 barz house rules ill drop first since I challenged and you accepted


I seen ya weak cypher posts they makes me laugh hysterically//
you wouldn't be FLY W/ BARS in a jail cell W/ PARAKEETS//
now I got you in tha battle room like this dude stands a chance//
you lack the right tools like arm amputees becomin handymans//
see the prolem iz nothin you speak can move me,//
your words obsolete and dont sound right like audios from black bootleg movies,//
my words creative like vandal letters yours show fatigue like camo sweaters//
this win for me was four-toed like deformed sandal wearers//
I'm new but Friendly? Bune known to be heartless as shit,//
an EXCUSE for MISSIN work is the only time someone admits quix is sick!!........~

[Quix]

sorry for the delay went away for new years





But i'm back yah dig!



Watch me Pop Dude, when i Talk rude, he a fag, he loving the Past Girl-Trends
don't be Shocked newb, so sit back and watch me 'Drop Bu' like i Did mah last Girlfriend
So, How you spit Flames if yah Never had a spark; got punchlines tah kick yah Face n Jab yah Heart!
call you Trash then Dart, cuz when i swing, i'll show yah 'more stars' than yah Avatar!
Watch me Relinquish Something; this fagz got less Flames than distinguished Ovens
we think your nothing, cuz catz around here 'prefer Bun's Toasted' like there English Muffins!
See i'm nice with it, let me wish you a Merry christmas and a Happy hannaka
b'fore i Bomb this Thug, cuz this kid only 'Blowing hot air' like playing Harmonacahs
Why he steady Bitching that he's Mean, never held heat only Sippin from his Tea!
Trippin when he speaks, cuz how you 'Sleeping on Quix', I even Dissed him in his Dreams!

G'luck dog!


Votes!

[YungDosia]

...GOOD LINES FROM BUNE...

NOTHING..

SORRY JUST DIDNT HAVE ANYTHING I LIKED HONESTLY...


...GOOD LINES FROM QUIX...
Watch me Pop Dude, when i Talk rude, he a fag, he loving the Past Girl-Trends
don't be Shocked newb, so sit back and watch me 'Drop Bu' like i Did mah last Girlfriend

BWAHAHAHAHA DOPE NAMEPLAY!^^

Watch me Relinquish Something; this fagz got less Flames than distinguished Ovens
we think your nothing, cuz catz around here 'prefer Bun's Toasted' like there English Muffins!

AGAIN LOVIN THAT NAMEPLAY...SET UP WAS BAD IN FIRST LINE BUT 2ND LINES PUNCH WAS SICK!


OVERALL NICE VERSE QUIX THIS IS THE SHIT I WANNA SEE FROM U MORE OFTEN, U REALLY DIDNT HAVE ANY PLAYED LINES IN HERE AND THE NAMPLAY WAS ON POINT!....BUNE U NEED TO ELEVATE AND WORK ON YA PUNCHES CUZ THAT WHOLE VERSE DIDNT TOUCH QUIX AT ALL..

VOTE-QUIX

[Riggz]

I seen ya weak cypher posts they makes me laugh hysterically//
you wouldn't be FLY W/ BARS in a jail cell W/ PARAKEETS//
1/5 …nothin there man
now I got you in tha battle room like this dude stands a chance//
you lack the right tools like arm amputees becomin handymans//
2/5 punch was ok, set up sucked
see the prolem iz nothin you speak can move me,//
your words obsolete and dont sound right like audios from black bootleg movies,//
3/5, worded better on the set up and reduced the length of the 2nd line would’ve been a nice punch.
my words creative like vandal letters yours show fatigue like camo sweaters//
this win for me was four-toed like deformed sandal wearers//
2/5 “four toed for foretold” hmmmm very forced, creative but very forced.
I'm new but Friendly? Bune known to be heartless as shit,//
an EXCUSE for MISSIN work is the only time someone admits quix is sick!!........~
2/5 sub par closer at best. Try playing around with syllables at the end of your bars for a better sound.

Quix:

Watch me Pop Dude, when i Talk rude, he a fag, he loving the Past Girl-Trends
don't be Shocked newb, so sit back and watch me 'Drop Bu' like i Did mah last Girlfriend
3/5 – multies were there, punch was good.. would’ve removed “so sit back and…” to make it fit better
So, How you spit Flames if yah Never had a spark; got punchlines tah kick yah Face n Jab yah Heart!
call you Trash then Dart, cuz when i swing, i'll show yah 'more stars' than yah Avatar!
2/5 these were fillers at best Quix
Watch me Relinquish Something; this fagz got less Flames than distinguished Ovens
we think your nothing, cuz catz around here 'prefer Bun's Toasted' like there English Muffins!
3.5/5 liked the English muffin line, but the set up was sub par. Still creative punch.
See i'm nice with it, let me wish you a Merry christmas and a Happy hannaka
b'fore i Bomb this Thug, cuz this kid only 'Blowing hot air' like playing Harmonacahs
5/5 perfect line all the way through.. even flowed well.
Why he steady Bitching that he's Mean, never held heat only Sippin from his Tea!
Trippin when he speaks, cuz how you 'Sleeping on Quix', I even Dissed him in his Dreams!
2/5 tried to hard with the multies and the closer was below your standards.
Bune – 10/20 below average (work on punch setup and syllable structure and you’ll be a worthy adversary)
Quix – 15.5/20 above average (as expected, you fukin’ herb LOL naw, I’m just hatin’… good job Q)

Quix gets it