Young Dosia vs Plex

[complexity]

12 lines
(suppose to be an hour battle, due at midnight)
uh, no biting and things like that

[YungDosia]

Check...Im a start keying now

[complexity]

lol, not a big fan of checks, but fine

go, lol

[YungDosia]

lol...my bad, u can start keyn now too ormake um due n an hour from now.

[complexity]

I assault your type with a falcon knife, one slice will solve this fight
I've watched the evolution of rhymes and yours aren't evolving right
Yung getting Spun like the college-life, you're looking to frail for ten lines
your pen lies, the Olson Twins have ten times, the enzymes
and fine, I'll admit I liked some of them rhymes, in the evolution battle
them are the same punchlines, I use to tackle from stupid assholes
stop yourself from future wack flows, our audience is holding prayers
they know your scared because I'm murdering yung like polar bears
I'm kidding, NO ONE cares! I'm the man around here and the top poster
this kids a faggot, the only one who rolls with doe is a pot smoker
I'll drop dosia, ur a hip hop poser, the cunning type, sounding dumb on mics
this has become ur life, joined a hundred sites, not one MC said yung is nice

[YungDosia]

Dog i make that cash...punchlines have complex bout to shake fast...
Cuz i can Shatter Plexi Easier then trying to break glass..!!

He aint ever do shows for his town...u shouldnt even start spits...
Cuz Complex aint in the building...Less he in Apartments..!!

See me i get things poppin...lifes movin fast ud see blurry motion...
And yeah..C's Pretty Big.....Referring To the ocean..!!!

My skill i abuse it...murder emcees when i use it...
He dont got no story...Its just the beat behind his music...!!

Nigga this is Illest Lyrics...We realy get it on here...
And Judging by your passed verses...i can tell that you dont belong here..!!!

This fagget jocks mad cock...he was kinda good, now i wanna hear ur raps stop...
Cuz Its obvious Comp Fell Off....Like I dropped my labtop..!!!


Keyed....do not feed...drop urs soon...

-- Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:19 pm --

ooops didnt see u already dropped..

lets get sum votes

[Riggz]

Metas: Plex
Punches: Yung (had one for every line)
Flow: Plex (Yung was a slight bit choppy on the read, but hell so am I)
Complexity: Plex (obvious... his multies were crazy for a quick key)
Most enjoyable: Yung
Name Play: Yung (plexi, comp, "C")

Catagory wise, you guys come out even so I will vote off of the most enjoyable. The one who would've gotten all the ooooo's and ahhhhhs in a live battle....

...Vote = Young
Dude's making his presence felt, I'll tell you that much.

Excellent battle guys.

[YungDosia]

1-0 Thanks for voting appreciate it.

-- Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:00 pm --

people who vote leave a link to the battle u need votes on

[Absolute]

I think this was a good battle. Definitely can tell Plex keyed his, and for what it was, props. But IMO Dosia's verse had more "enthusiasm"; he had creative punches, nameplay, and overall came for a battle. Plex, you was an entertaining read and was a solid drop. Yung, you gotta utilize your whole bar, have your first line be a set up rather than a transitional series that rhymes with the punch. Other than that, I have no negatives to say.
But Yung GMV for overall entertainment and nameplay.

I have no battles currently but I got a few pieces in The scriptures that could use feedback

[YungDosia]

My first lines are all set ups...

thanks for the vote tho!

2-0

i will check out those drops soon aswell.

[Absolute]

See me i get things poppin...lifes movin fast ud see blurry motion...

Ill you give the fact there were more set-ups than I orginally thought, but not ALL Dosia..and its not a completely bad thing. Everybody does it I think. It the thing that seperates vets from up and comers. I do the same thing with alot of my first lines..

[YungDosia]

Understand what ur saying...but ur wrong "Get things poppin" and lifes movin fast, as in im doin big shit was my first line right....my second was "C's pretty big"....understand? ive been doin this for a bit, dont trip.

[complexity]

Nameplay: Yung
Wordplay: Yung
Personals: Complexity
Punches: Tie
Entertainment: Yung
Multis: Plex

Plex's verse was alright, but you could tell that he didn't put much time into it. Yung's verse was nice, though some of his nameplay was played, it was still dope.

Overall: Yung