YungDosia vs Evolution

[Ambiguous Realm]

5 bars/10lines
explained votes preferred
no crew votes
first to 5 (3-0 = k.o)

due 1 hour after check in.. this is my check in

[YungDosia]

Check...

[Ambiguous Realm]

i'll give yung dos a shot of medicine like pediatric care,
ya bars like exaggerated couples, they come in pre-dramatic pairs,

i've trained to beat u to confetti, so i practiced rippin paper,
u need a baby DOSe,cuz ur mother was on crack when givin labor,

don't expect to get far i got a knack for spittin greater,
u couldn't 'blow' me out the match if u had iraq's decision makers,

battlin yung.. that's like child abuse plus adolescent rape,
cuz i might 'cum up short' if i end up half a second 'late'

this isn't even a challenge, at best.. these rhymes are random,
there's no room for yung, and each spit u 'fit'..is just a line of tantrum

[YungDosia]

Im a run all over this bitch..And he damn sure knew it...
Cuz its Easy To Go Through Evolution..Specially if a caveman can do it..!!

Now Judging by ya skill u wont be famous..or have lots of loot...
Cuz no one wants Entertainment from E..Unless they watch the soup..!!

Ive heard him spit his whack shit.. Really what the fuck fag!!?...
Bitch you should never drop anything...untill ur nuts have..!!!

Emcees I roast for fun..if u boast ur done...
And thanks to Dateline NBC..Its clear now that you cant come close to young..!!

Honestly Evolution dont bring heat...Ill leave him rocked well..
Cuz he dont Deliver Fire... He just uses HotMail..!!!


Dont Understand a Bar Dont Vote..

-- Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:38 pm --

Were Ready For Votes...

[Def-init]

Evo

i'll give yung dos a shot of medicine like pediatric care,
ya bars like exaggerated couples, they come in pre-dramatic pairs,

I wasnt really feeling that opener. 3/10

i've trained to beat u to confetti, so i practiced rippin paper,
u need a baby DOSe,cuz ur mother was on crack when givin labor,

Mom on crack has been done to death. 4/10

don't expect to get far i got a knack for spittin greater,
u couldn't 'blow' me out the match if u had iraq's decision makers,

Nice. I like this bar. I love the word play here 8/10

battlin yung.. that's like child abuse plus adolescent rape,
cuz i might 'cum up short' if i end up half a second 'late'

^^ made me chuckle 8/10

this isn't even a challenge, at best.. these rhymes are random,
there's no room for yung, and each spit u 'fit'..is just a line of tantrum

You ended it much better then you opened it. 6/10

But for someone with really good talent.
You just didnt come hard at all.
29/50*

Yung

Im a run all over this bitch..And he damn sure knew it...
Cuz its Easy To Go Through Evolution..Specially if a caveman can do it..!!

FIRE!! hahaha lol. Nice 10/10

Now Judging by ya skill u wont be famous..or have lots of loot...
Cuz no one wants Entertainment from E..Unless they watch the soup..!!

Not so much...A good attempt but it is lacking.
6/10

Ive heard him spit his whack shit.. Really what the fuck fag!!?...
Bitch you should never drop anything...untill ur nuts have..!!!

Played idea, But you fashioned it well 7/10

Emcees I roast for fun..if u boast ur done...
And thanks to Dateline NBC..Its clear now that you cant come close to young..!!

^^I like the reference, feeling it. 6/10

Honestly Evolution dont bring heat...Ill leave him rocked well..
Cuz he dont Deliver Fire... He just uses HotMail..!!!

^^This closer was the worst of your barz.
4/10

33/50


Vote = Yung. Even more so for being a rookie here. He did great against a "vet"

[YungDosia]

Thanks for the vote...thought people woulda felt the second bar lol. upppin nice battle evolution

[Ambiguous Realm]

29/50 btw lol, not like 2 makes a difference, just noticed the math was wrong

but yea good battle yung, definitely need a rematch sometime,


uppin for some votes in this

[Def-init]

rofl. ya it is. that's cause I upped your 4th bar 2 points after I read the battle again. but didnt update the total score heh.

[YungDosia]

thanks 4 votin

[Arvincible]

punches - Yung
personals - Yung
flow - Evo took multis but yung took delivery..so tie
wordplay - Yung
opener/closer - Yung

..it was obvious evolution half ass this, i seen this guy rip guys apart lyrically idk wtf he was tryin here.
one example is


i'll give yung dos a shot of medicine like pediatric care,
ya bars like exaggerated couples, they come in pre-dramatic pairs

^^its clever in a way but not hard hitting at all, of course the rhyming is not a problem but still, the delivery was not there.

but anyways Yungdosia did a great job with attacking his opponent here.

Im a run all over this bitch..And he damn sure knew it...
Cuz its Easy To Go Through Evolution..Specially if a caveman can do it..!!


^^ that wasd my fave because its not only a nameplay but its a reference to something I know about which is the Geiko insurance haha

so Yung gets my vote

[YungDosia]

Thanks Fam

2-0 Uppin

[Lawgix]

punches - Dosia
personals - eh Evo tried but failed so Dosia
flow - i'd have to agree with Arv tied
wordplay - Dosia
opener/closer - Dosia hands down... Evo tried but again failed i see where he was tryin to set it up it just didn't really work out haha

good battle both of you but i give my vote to Yung Dosia

[YungDosia]

3-0 KO

thanks 4 voting can a mod close and record this