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Prophet
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Lyrical Re-Up

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Quick keystyle

I get cash, stay on a level you couldn't step past
Ya sets ass, I'm fresh as stepping barefoot into wet grass
Ya rep smashed, my hearts gold n ya chest glass 
The tech blast, leave a couple lead marks in ya sketch pad
So artistic with it, Leonardo's my first name
Paintbrush at hand, you'll end up with a worse frame
Got 'em scared to call me out, beholdin' a cursed name
But to read my text special, feels like fuckin' ya first dame
Or snortin' ya first line, bustin' ya first nine
Or realizing you were ill after spittin' ya first rhyme
See its the internal hustler, I pump adrenaline
Heart of a spartan, I'll slump a hundred-ten of 'em
And then some, run laps past a challenger
I decide the end of y'all, like the aztec calendar
Decide fates like Nostradomus, the "Prophet" name stays
Why you think I chose it? to hear Profit nampeplays?
Nah ya thinking crooked, better get ya head straight
Emerge as a hearst driver, carrying all this dead weight
Why hate? Knock ya down if ya can't withstand the king
Knock sense in you jr.'s call the kid Danny Green
  
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Post by Quix »

yup yah had a bonkers flow here, i liked this piece!

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The tech blast, leave a couple lead marks in ya sketch pad
So artistic with it, Leonardo's my first name
Paintbrush at hand, you'll end up with a worse frame
Got 'em scared to call me out, beholdin' a cursed name
But to read my text special, feels like fuckin' ya first dame
Or snortin' ya first line, bustin' ya first nine
Or realizing you were ill after spittin' ya first rhyme

^^^^
I was feeling the whole thing but this part especially stood out to me; this is sick and overall a good drop
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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Re: Lyrical Re-Up

Post by Riggz »

Ill ass flow Prophet.. the name/frame/dame line flowed very well. And the prophet name stays/name plays bar was very witty!
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Quick keystyle

I get cash, stay on a level you couldn't step past
Ya sets ass, I'm fresh as stepping barefoot into wet grass

Naaaah

Ya rep smashed, my hearts gold n ya chest glass
The tech blast, leave a couple lead marks in ya sketch pad

Feeling This .. Nice.


So artistic with it, Leonardo's my first name
Paintbrush at hand, you'll end up with a worse frame

Filler.



Got 'em scared to call me out, beholdin' a cursed name
But to read my text special, feels like fuckin' ya first dame

Nah



And then some, run laps past a challenger
I decide the end of y'all, like the aztec calendar
Decide fates like Nostradomus, the "Prophet" name stays
Why you think I chose it? to hear Profit nampeplays?
Nah ya thinking crooked, better get ya head straight
Emerge as a hearst driver, carrying all this dead weight
Why hate? Knock ya down if ya can't withstand the king


Better ..
Could Of been worded better.


Anyways Cool Drop, Nice To See U Droppin you've Elevated

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Re: Lyrical Re-Up

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice to see u droppin again, here's a few lines that stuck out to me

I'm fresh as stepping barefoot into wet grass
Ya rep smashed, my hearts gold n ya chest glass
The tech blast, leave a couple lead marks in ya sketch pad



I decide the end of y'all, like the aztec calendar

Decide fates like Nostradomus, the "Prophet" name stays
Why you think I chose it? to hear Profit nampeplays?


the rhymescheme for those came off nicely, overall i was impressed
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