Intellectual Strokes

[DaPrince]

I ain't talking bench press, but I'm raising the bar
I'm commanding metaphors like an army at war
a purple hearted explorer I been wounded and scarred
consumed by remarks meant to leave me fuming and charred
But I'm immune to the shards, cuz like a phoenix I rose
composed a helix of flows with genius weaved into prose
exceeded previous woes with a routine that arose
of sealing feelings in quotes that produced medical notes
...Intellectual strokes that I created and wrote
to engross and bestow an exposition of gold
A new edition I hold so intermission the old
and In addition behold the definition of bold
a blind magician so cold my spells are all i see (icy)
impelled to scrawl nightly til my farewell's frightening
til I'm compared to the kings and declared one with ease
til my feats reach their peak and i accomplish my dreams

[Haz]

I ain't talking bench press, but I'm raising the bar
I'm commanding metaphors like an army at war
a purple hearted explorer I been wounded and scarred
consumed by remarks meant to leave me fuming and charred


Fire yo ..

But I'm immune to the shards, cuz like a phoenix I rose
composed a helix of flows with genius weaved into prose

Feels like a biggie flow ..


exceeded previous woes with a routine that arose
of sealing feelings in quotes that produced medical notes


i Don't Like This .. Feel Like its just worded weird & doesnt fall through right


Intellectual strokes that I created and wrote
to engross and bestow an exposition of gold
A new edition I hold so intermission the old
and In addition behold the definition of bold

Haha i Like This ..


a blind magician so cold my spells are all i see (icy)
impelled to scrawl nightly til my farewell's frightening
til I'm compared to the kings and declared one with ease
til my feats reach their peak and i accomplish my dreams


Could of Came With a Stronger Finisher ..

6.5/10


Decent verse, Keep Dropping

[QwarterZ]

This was kewl....I thought it was goin' to be somethin' nicer
It's still nice but the title is somewhat misleadin' then again I see your vocab buildin' up aswell

which is nice! either way this piece came together nicely
flow was on point for the most part....and well...keep writing! LoL!

[eMCee Havic]

of sealing feelings in quotes that produced medical notes
...Intellectual strokes that I created and wrote

pretty sick man

flow was good, complexity was ill. overall good piece man