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Slow Dance

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Yeeeeeaaaa....

Sometimes I feel like I'm blowin' up
I ain't known enough or close enough
the limit just seems so whoa...it's up
past the sky, the stars and so on hun
but....a slow dance is all I need....

*ahem* k....

So I groove I zone in on perspective
eclectic, movement is beyond perfected
it's connection, it's motive, acception
it's askin' the perfect questions
takin' a chance, take it slow....
yea grind hard, but don't make it fast
take ya hands, grasp the hips....
ok so maybe it's like chasin' ass
maybe not? takes a lot to grasp the shhhhh...
don't say a word, rest your head on the shoulder
momentum builds as the room get's colder
we get closer, we move like a million soldiers
yea we work in a perfect union...
sorry for the words in the verse I'm usin'
in unision...Im tryna say maybe I?
should take it slower, I don't know uhh...
I could play shy, or I could play right
move past the hoodrats who unladylike
what am I sayin'...I don't know my pen keep movin'
plus I'm stuck with this pent up nuisance
you know? you don't? how do I say it?
maybe I can't cuz the pace just keep changin'

Hello Hip Hop I am home....*ahem*

somethin' caught my eye so I'm off steppin'
two steps pass the limit, now I'm lost, stressin'
Obsession it got most MC's crossdressin'
(get it?) well maybe my picture is off settin'
you won't get it unless you open the closed section
pissed off urs n ill is I when I just flow septic
so errythin' I did just seems...so...po...et...ic
I'm gooooonnnnne!!!!!!!!
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Re: Slow Dance

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So I groove I zone in on perspective
eclectic, movement is beyond perfected
it's connection, it's motive, acception

that ^^^^ was pretty dope man

this was definately a good drop man, seems like it got slept on quite a bit. real smooth flow to it i liked it man.. keep um commin
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Re: Slow Dance

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This would probably sound pretty damn good in audio. I would use part of it as a cameo on some Trey Songz/Usher type joint. As far as written, it probably got slept on due to the topic and the "appearance" of choppy flow, but actually I was feelin it.
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Re: Slow Dance

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Yeeeeeaaaa....

Sometimes I feel like I'm blowin' up
I ain't known enough or close enough
the limit just seems so whoa...it's up
past the sky, the stars and so on hun
but....a slow dance is all I need....


This is Aiight .. Catchy flow


So I groove I zone in on perspective
eclectic, movement is beyond perfected
it's connection, it's motive, acception
it's askin' the perfect questions
takin' a chance, take it slow....
yea grind hard, but don't make it fast
take ya hands, grasp the hips....
ok so maybe it's like chasin' ass


multis pretty On Point,


maybe not? takes a lot to grasp the shhhhh...
don't say a word, rest your head on the shoulder

on The Shoulder?

momentum builds as the room get's colder
we get closer, we move like a million soldiers
yea we work in a perfect union...
sorry for the words in the verse I'm usin'

lol Word. Liked this

in unision...Im tryna say maybe I?
should take it slower, I don't know uhh...
I could play shy, or I could play right
move past the hoodrats who unladylike


average


what am I sayin'...I don't know my pen keep movin'
plus I'm stuck with this pent up nuisance
you know? you don't? how do I say it?
maybe I can't cuz the pace just keep changin'

Could of came stronger.


somethin' caught my eye so I'm off steppin'
two steps pass the limit, now I'm lost, stressin'
Obsession it got most MC's crossdressin'
(get it?) well maybe my picture is off settin'
you won't get it unless you open the closed section
pissed off urs n ill is I when I just flow septic
so errythin' I did just seems...so...po...et...ic

This was cool... Obsession was Straight, septic No.
Poetic , yeah..


Anyways this had it's up n downs but thats the main factor in Elevating...

anyways

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