Dedication Volume One

[QwarterZ]

I scribe sentences, suffocate my page with syphillis
torment my tablet with temper tantrums and tidbits
sippin' incellin while these infants inquire who the illest is
illegitimate fathers, forgo fathomin' my fluctuating flow
frustrated foes, nip at my heels so fuck the hating folks
I guesstimate torture, guest'n gates where chevy chase hopes
yea this is a funland, fundin' the function so rambunxious
so my hand touches the times table multiplies my rhyme'd fables
I fissure crack flows split the world in half BC's time'd Abel
what the fluck I gotta prove my minds fatal the guillotine ripper
creatine sipper, fuck redlights you'll see blu rays n DVD mixtures
I'm so off my rockin' chair when all my thoughts is aired
thoughts is heired, thoughts is rare, it's doctor yea
no I'm more like Kovorkian as soon as the fortie's lift-ed?
mis-conception, leave's em stutterin' my lines like Porky Pig
I get irritated, why I gotta ask the same questions twice
scracth away at victims live's while my bites infect with lice
throw paper n heckle speakers, while the thought of death beseach ya
I don't fuck with the young'ns like Mary K left your bleacher.....

I don't know...this part one...add more later

[complexity]

A couple of the bars seemed like they were going down a dead end. I think that you can identify the ones I speak of. The vocabulary was good, maybe a bit arcane, I'm one to speak though.

My favorite bars.

"I scribe sentences, suffocate my page with syphillis
torment my tablet with temper tantrums and tidbits"

"I fissure crack flows split the world in half BC's time'd Abel
what the fluck I gotta prove my minds fatal the guillotine ripper
creatine sipper, fuck redlights you'll see blu rays n DVD mixtures"


Cool man. I wouldn't say the verse was extraordinary, but it was good enough that I read it twice.

[Riggz]

--Shit I liked it! Had that kind of sick, twisted, word-play demented feel.
"what the fluck I gotta prove my minds fatal the guillotine ripper
creatine sipper, fuck redlights you'll see blu rays n DVD mixtures
I'm so off my rockin' chair when all my thoughts is aired
thoughts is heired, thoughts is rare, it's doctor yea
no I'm more like Kovorkian as soon as the fortie's lift-ed?" - to most this would sound repetative.. but when you spit it outloud, it sounds tight as hell.

Nice drop QZ. Hot word play!