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- The Gonz
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Fuck it, why not...
Just thought I'd throw a couple up for yall to check out. Give me feedback... positive, negative, doesn't matter.
- token jesture
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Re: Fuck it, why not...
the first two u get mad props for second two were aight still last 1 was pretty dope i wasnt feeling 74 quite so much
all in all tho fam ur talented man keep em coming
all in all tho fam ur talented man keep em coming
I drop more dope than fucking top shotters
call me korean meatballs coz im the dogs bollox
call me korean meatballs coz im the dogs bollox
- drunken jesus
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Re: Fuck it, why not...
71 - sounds like its sampled from a movie score the lil switchups are cool no real spot for a hook though, drums are ok the tom sounds bad when it hits on the one kick before the snare
45 - melodys really odd, bass is played an octave or two too low its barely distinguishable drums are a lil too stiff bounce is too robotic, its cool but a lil too empty overall imo
77 - sample chop is dope drum switchups are cool this would sound 20x iller with a bassline instead of just bassy kicks, probably the best outta the 4 imo
74 - melodys real weird and atmospheric but i like it bass is played too low again, drums aren't that great i like how they build up but they kinda sound like an organ preset drumloop or something i dunno, this beat has the most potential to be ill just needs to build up to a crazy chorus breakdown then maybe a solo or two
45 - melodys really odd, bass is played an octave or two too low its barely distinguishable drums are a lil too stiff bounce is too robotic, its cool but a lil too empty overall imo
77 - sample chop is dope drum switchups are cool this would sound 20x iller with a bassline instead of just bassy kicks, probably the best outta the 4 imo
74 - melodys real weird and atmospheric but i like it bass is played too low again, drums aren't that great i like how they build up but they kinda sound like an organ preset drumloop or something i dunno, this beat has the most potential to be ill just needs to build up to a crazy chorus breakdown then maybe a solo or two
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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- Mass Effex
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Re: Fuck it, why not...
45.Wierd synth you used, I sorta liked it. For some reason it didn't sound like one whole beat, like the drums sounded too separate from the from, really nice drum line though
71.Once again you used a very different synth, I liked it though. This may be a new style that could be very unique and good. Drums are good, sound a little distorted at times though. I liked it all together though.
74.Cool intro, liked the bells, intro lasted a little bit too long, liked the atmosphere
77.Nice chop job on the sample, like Jesus said, a bass line would nicer. I really liked this one, as far as changing anything maybe a little piano or something could have made it better to give it more variety. Nice switching up one the drums
Overall, good shit, just keep experimenting and you'll learn a lot and be able to improve your craft more. Keep working at it.
71.Once again you used a very different synth, I liked it though. This may be a new style that could be very unique and good. Drums are good, sound a little distorted at times though. I liked it all together though.
74.Cool intro, liked the bells, intro lasted a little bit too long, liked the atmosphere
77.Nice chop job on the sample, like Jesus said, a bass line would nicer. I really liked this one, as far as changing anything maybe a little piano or something could have made it better to give it more variety. Nice switching up one the drums
Overall, good shit, just keep experimenting and you'll learn a lot and be able to improve your craft more. Keep working at it.
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- DeadStarProduction
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Re: Fuck it, why not...
45: sounds a gd mix on drum clarity.
71: synth is gr8, nice drums again...
74: this has an original feel like sort of an alternative track.....
theyre soft & mellow and def a good style developing man.... nice1
id advise that u just keep working on them and they'll turn out sweet.
71: synth is gr8, nice drums again...
74: this has an original feel like sort of an alternative track.....
theyre soft & mellow and def a good style developing man.... nice1
id advise that u just keep working on them and they'll turn out sweet.
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Re: Fuck it, why not...
45- ain't bad, the drums are nice, but the synth sound I don't like so much. This could be better with a bit more umph, maybe some strings in there or something, and some more, maybe kinda electronic type drums
71- this is real nice, inspired a freestyle. this is the kinda beat i like writing to. a little deep, with some mellow movement, but can carry words real well. this is without a doubt my favorite among what u got up here.
74- medium. i know lots of beats are repetitive, but this one feels like it pretty much just repeats the same 3 seconds over and over again with just a couple little things thrown in there occasionally
77- i like. this is my second fav of these 4. definitely flowable. an occasional piano riff or some floating piano keys may sound nice with it. maybe a fast paced hi-hat kinda hidden in the background could enhance the flow wit it. but nice one here for sure...
I see you dropped this like 10 months ago, u been buildin' on the beat front at all since then? if so, i'd like to hear some of your more recent creations...
71- this is real nice, inspired a freestyle. this is the kinda beat i like writing to. a little deep, with some mellow movement, but can carry words real well. this is without a doubt my favorite among what u got up here.
74- medium. i know lots of beats are repetitive, but this one feels like it pretty much just repeats the same 3 seconds over and over again with just a couple little things thrown in there occasionally
77- i like. this is my second fav of these 4. definitely flowable. an occasional piano riff or some floating piano keys may sound nice with it. maybe a fast paced hi-hat kinda hidden in the background could enhance the flow wit it. but nice one here for sure...
I see you dropped this like 10 months ago, u been buildin' on the beat front at all since then? if so, i'd like to hear some of your more recent creations...


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