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Change Clothes Remix
haven't posted anything in awhile so heres the latest remix i did, its not finished i'll be adding another bass to make it bump harder and changing it up a bit to make it a bit more funky
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Re: Change Clothes Remix
Drums suited the style you went for. I wasn't really feelin' the saw line. The beat kinda drowned out the lyrics just a little bit, the piano sounded a little fake, but not too bad at all, but knowing about producing, it sounds nice. The synth hit was above decent. Harmony was fantastic all around. Very good quality sounds and mixing. The drastic combination of such electric instruments and such natural instruments was a gamble, I wouldn't say you totally nailed it, but you did good. Sounded very professional though other than the low vocals. That was just my opinion, I'm about intermediate as far a producing goes, so that's an opinion from an intermediate mind.
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Re: Change Clothes Remix
the piano was fake in the sense that its an electric not an acoustic, regular grands are a lil too dry for funk imo, saw line & the wah wah are gonna change up in the finished version i processed the saw a lil too much and it lost its bass drive so i'm gonna layer another bass sound with it as well
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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