Harbinger of Elevation

[Def-init]

I'm a lyrical 'Joke-engineer' AKA. a rappin comedian
A mother fucking product proud to be produced Canadian,
a sophisticated stick-up kid strapped for danger
a rhyming master with a radical rhythm for disaster
a 'take a stand' rapper, an urban gorilla leaving no war over!
Like Pac, I watched as Brenda’s face was raped and bashed
while the perpetrator was protected under nightfall and mask!
Mom fears morning cause police still might call and ask!
No motives to trace, no table no grace,
Just foreign fables of snakes, long fangs, live bait.
Internal Carnage, a path of the great!
Screams, a selection on Satan's play list...AK's spitting clips!
Scripts of Horror-core depictions, prescriptions and brandy
Oxy cotton candy and dudes to busy poop pushing the butt gravy
to notice they fail, like a Haitian hockey team’s record trail!
Nights I spent, in jail. parts of my soul lost, no bill of sale...
Shanks to spleens, supplied crack to fiends,
they like fat fucks that'd gladly pay Tuesday for a hamburger today!
I rhyme like a spirit in dismay; I sent Santa my list...
received soap, some mouthwash coal and a clenched fist!
No pets causing laughter, no presents with diamonds
Just paramedics, sirens, cookies in pieces,
another alcoholic with diseases
My dark imagination contains no recess
cocking a biscuit, drop in the new Jedi Mind diskette
My flow is fast, fifty moves ahead on this chess set!
I'm nasty when I strike with titan steel over debt
psychotic rage contained and phased within this entire page
a mage creating chaos, kickin knowledge, fuck mistletoe
Go to Mediterranean regions and cultivate Jerusalem sage
My middle finger swinging, slinging crack cause of minimum wage
I have Multiple personalities,
I’m three idolized immortals like the Holy Trinity
Water torture and abusive language can be fatal
like slapping your bitch in a class labeled “Prenatal”!

[Riggz]

You like this sick shit don'tcha? Well, I've enjoyed most of your drops... except this one was a little confusing at times... especially the rhyme structure. A lot of times when you were fukin' around with the word play, it seems you forgot which word you were rhyming with..or either you were using slashes and just pressed the enter key at parts you thought were the end of the line/bar, either way it wasn't flowing very well at points.
You did have some nice one liners in there:
" I sent Santa my list...
received soap, some mouthwash coal and a clenched fist!"
and
"My middle finger swinging, slinging crack cause of minimum wage"
..just you didn't set them up very well.

I still like you tho Def'