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I Am American #5

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I specialize in confidence, mesmerize an audience like god in a sense
the rhymes electrify the consciousness, step inside where weapons lie
a promise land, anonymous as a common man, synonymous with contraband
where all wrong began, the place where Obama stands when he bombs iran
for all their demonic plans, creating a new taliban, just slaughtering life
we are caught in a plight, that even Washigtons right is too exhausted to fight
God is the light, he'll give you the water and ice, not the hydraulic device
never taught em to write, but the young kids know how to use a soldering pipe
its not looking nice, I watch and listen, the media is full of contradictions
they get paid to give you haunted visions, makes me want to launch a mission
to space to get away from this withdrawn existence, the longest distance
these pundents should make an honest living as politians, every promise giving
broken, within the laws restriction, I'm appalled another tax dollar missing
I just saw it sitting there, it must have got up and disappeared like a small religion
that's the beginning, follow closely, why can't these idiots take one term and retire
easy cuz they have become permanent liars, even the ones I learned to admire
I'd rather be burning in fire then a Joe Lieberman, makes me want to say a suffix
like fuck-this, when we have politicians with moral compasses and still can't find justice
when the times are toughest, I rhyme the roughest, the corrupt pricks can suck dick
enough with the fuck wits, lucky I don't get out of control like our national budget
that's another subject to piss me off, excuse me, this isn't a diss, its hip hop
think, I'm angry now, this isn't even the sickest scripture drop, I'm something Quix can't stop
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Re: I Am American #5

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X-lent topical post as usual Plex. Love the political slant... like the black version of Rush Limbaugh or Mark Levin - haha. I like the fact that you're an independant thinker that doesn't sway with the mass...(if the left wing voters only new what was ahead of them) ahem.. I digress.. anywayz... as far as the verse: always entertaining with the word play and innuendo metaphores; ie -- "broken, within the laws restriction, I'm appalled another tax dollar missing
I just saw it sitting there, it must have got up and disappeared like a small religion
that's the beginning, follow closely, why can't these idiots take one term and retire
easy cuz they have become permanent liars, even the ones I learned to admire" -- I really liked that one... hehe
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Ill. I don't need to say more.
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lol i tryed to pick out a part to quote and i couldnt do it haha this is ill from start to finish bro, alot of really powerful lines, the tax dollar line and the whole thing leading up to it was probly my favorite part, your work is always consistent and this is deffinitely one of my favorites, good stuff
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this is hot ma man good shit.!
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wow i was in awe at the flow of this piece.. definately killed it, it kinda reminded me of "renegade" with em and jay.. shit was that ill man

lol at the quix line in the end though.. it wasnt needed, but it was to be funny i assume

U always have a strong run with political topics anyways and i really liked the whole piece

10/10 it doesnt get any better than this

hop in a booth with this shit
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That was fuckin' awesome. Not even exaggerating.

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Re: I Am American #5

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Yup this was pretty hot Plex! erybody allready said what was up!!


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to space to get away from this withdrawn existence, the longest distance
these pundents should make an honest living as politians, every promise giving
broken, within the laws restriction, I'm appalled another tax dollar missing
^^^^^^I liked that

this was dope all around but I wanted to quote that part cuz this whole thing was just so ill, a very nice piece my dude
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