Ok, once again.. this track has been done over in it's entirety... Quality is 100% better! I'm really gettin' the hang of Adobe Audition and Mixdown. Audio heads, take a 2nd listen, first timers tell me what you think.
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The song is about me doin' this shit for years, trying to skool cats (who are probably way better than me in this new age hip-hop.. but who gives a shit cause it's 2:00am on the east coast)!
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Re: "tHe vETERAn"
i got the same sample quality is ass flow cool delivery is off a lil nice job tho holla for collabo!
Re: "tHe vETERAn"
i feel the same as i do about your other track you have talent no question quality is just off, this track is cool though im feelin the lyrics and content good shit man keep droppin just work on the sound a lil
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Re: "tHe vETERAn"
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

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Re: "tHe vETERAn"
I may redo this track now that I have better settings. I may not have the best quality until next year.. right now I just hope to improve with every drop. In quality, lyricism, and flow.
Re: "tHe vETERAn"
beats aight
vocal qualities not very good....flo's real steady though..you got a deep ass voice..maybe turn the bass down a lil in ya voice to give it a lil more clarity..that might werk..
other than that id say it could be a nice joint with better quality..
vocal qualities not very good....flo's real steady though..you got a deep ass voice..maybe turn the bass down a lil in ya voice to give it a lil more clarity..that might werk..
other than that id say it could be a nice joint with better quality..
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Re: "tHe vETERAn"
Tre, I'm already working on a clearer version of this. My problem was I was working with the wrong equipment all together. Infinite hooked me up with some settings for Adobe and I stayed up until 2am messing around with Auto-tune 5 to bring my voice up higher. My last drop (http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/used- ... 14931.html) is 80x clearer (should've turned the vocals up) but I have my qualms with that one too.
Thanks for keeping me in your scope.
Thanks for keeping me in your scope.
Re: "Da Veteran" (Remixed)
all Good homie juss tryin to help..1
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^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
[align=center]
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
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http://www.zshare.net/download/6399071566e45a94/
^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
[align=center]

Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
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