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Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

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5 bars
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Punchlines
Wordplay
Nameplay
Multis
Flow

Due 72 hours after check-in.

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-- Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:41 pm --

It wont be long to drop this lame quick, leave "chain split" in half like canines in pursuit
no coffin, you wont lie in a suit, time for the loot, then leave covered in lime in the roots
I hope you're prepared to lose in a sec, it comes so natural ta me that soon I'll forget
I wont take it easy cause ya new to the set, instead, I'll "2" non-existent like neuterin' pets!
I'll cut you up all over, just like if on this battle you bet ya arms and gambled legs
you're the bottom of my food-"chain", docs'll be "pullin' shells out" like poorly done scrambled eggs
you shouldn't respond to my threads, cause soon you'll hit rock bottom, droppin bombs on ya head
leave you somberly red, you'll want revenge from this slaughter, soon you'll be wantin' me dead
I'm droppin kids with confidence, In this battle, you'll need more than luck to hurt me
By now it shouldn't be surprising the way I burn "2" like settin' fire to Russel's jersey!*



*Jamarcus Russel, QB for Raiders
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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

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You must be high on drugs, pop a pill maybe your raps gettin better
next day you wake up with insomnia, that's what i called mass effect in pure vactum
this is a mans world, go play mario and suck luigi's dick 300 second's
ima kill em with the stepmaster like 1,2. and your served with the best beltrum
you got Fear of nuclear weapons , i came to spray multible tantrums
hydrogen bombs getting out random, every verse getting cursed by cultural phantoms
your end will be primary secondary, when i get energy through nuclear fusionary's
that's using your fantasy in the mood of hellas fear, you got shitted heavinly
acknowledge your life is boring if there was a playboy magazine
oops what im saying, you cant injakelate without watching your mama scream



(im going off on the word Nucleomituphobia
your name and picture, i say it just to make things clear in this battle )

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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

Post by Frank Black »

Punchlines: Mass
Wordplay: Mass
Nameplay:Mass
Multis: None
Flow: chain
Personals: Mass
Enjoyment: Mass

MVGT// Mass. chain you have a whole bunch of potential and i fuks wit u because of that buh most of ya linnes were weak and mass went off on ya name play whihc was a good thing for his behave nice try chain i hope u evaluate more soon!
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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

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1-0 uppin
by the way, my 2nd bar meant to say, I'll LEAVE "2"
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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

Post by Riggz »

Honestly fellas, I didn't like either verse much.
Mass - bars were way to stretched and punches forced (hardly understood most of them) ...and man, what's with that "time for the loot" part? LOL, were you trying to make this fit into a multi scheme?

2chain - It may be me, but did you switch your rhyme structure mid stream from A-B-A-B to AABB? Threw me off from the very beginning. You flowed well for the most part but your punches seemed elementery at best "suck Lugi's dick 300 seconds" :?

I'm almost ready to just call this tie and say that I expected more from the both of you.. but I'll give it to Mass for his closing bar (though I hate explained lines)

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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

Post by Absolute »

^^^ I really wasn't feelin either verse. Actually Mass, while readin your verse i was thinking you were in trouble. ..


Not too much to break down here. Not too many punches, just lines with slight metaphors that rhyme. Although I'll give the advantage to Mass, becuase chain could've had just a decent 2 or 3 bars and pulled the W, but IMO it wasn't there. Mass gets my vote based on personals and flow.. Correct me if I'm wrong fellas, but did chains verse not rhyme twice?

You must be high on drugs, pop a pill maybe your raps gettin better
next day you wake up with insomnia, that's what i called mass effect in pure vactum

your end will be primary secondary, when i get energy through nuclear fusionary's
that's using your fantasy in the mood of hellas fear, you got shitted heavinly


okay maybe the second rhymes due to the "y" spelling, but IMO MAD FORCED...
BUt Chain, props on the vocab and the attempts at nameplay/wordplay. Cant get better if you don't try my nig.

MASS GMV, But he could have went way harder IMO..

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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

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Thanks for votin', and I'll even admit I did come a lot weaker than I know I'm capable of. Someone close this. 3-0
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Re: Mass Effekt vs. 2chain

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

Punchlines: neither..
Wordplay:mass
Nameplay:mass
Multis:mass
Flow:mass

vote:mass

2chain's had better vocab but overall lacked most of the areas..there was one decent rhymescheme... and i guarantee it was accidental..none the less a decent bar, still..mass cat swept it


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