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I Used To (The full version mixdown)

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I Used To (The full version mixdown)

Post by Riggz »

Ok, I dropped about a 1:30 seconds of this as my first track ever in the creation chamber. Basically turned the beat up loud and pressed record...ahhh the days of elementary school.. but Alas.. this one should get me graduating highschool into college.. Overall quality is better (IMO) so you guys should be able to hear everything clearly and not sound like I'm in a bathroom stall. Anywayz... you audio heads peep it and let me know what's my next step.

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Re: I Used To (The full version mixdown)

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Damn, talk about a sound quality improvement. The beat wasn't really to my taste, but not much really is. lol. Flow was above average, lyrics were not too simple, but not too complex, nice and catchy. Nice and radio friendly. I liked this shit. Good job Riggz, keep at it, you got potential, just work on ya flow a little.
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Re: I Used To (The full version mixdown)

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yeah this quality is ALOT better... a bit quiet had to turn my stereo up real loud... but still flow really needs work... if u think theres a line too long shorten it and think of somethin else that would fit... that will help... newayz good shit mayne... and btw... how old r u??? u sound like old haha... not tryin to be an asshole but lol just curious...
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Re: I Used To (The full version mixdown)

Post by Riggz »

Actually, I laid the track over the verse and didn't adjust the tempo... see I knew you audio heads would catch that... good lookin' out Mass/Lawgz.. always preciate the feedback from you guys.

...and Lawgz.. I'm old enough not to answer that question. ;)
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Re: I Used To (The full version mixdown)

Post by Riggz »

Preciate it a bunch Infinite... shit you sent worked perfectly. Now it's just fine tuning the volume, tempo, etc... making sure the flow aligns with the track. Initially I voiced over the track.. but had to redo the track and somehow it got distorted and offline with the vocals. I can hear it clearly in this.
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Re: I Used To (The full version mixdown)

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yea this some old school gutta shit yo.

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