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Riggz n Infinite "Takin' My Ball - The Remix"

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This ain't the quality of Viral, Lawgix or Tre' (so get they shitz off your mind before hittin' play) but it was fun makin it and we tryin' to elevate...

LOL! N-Joy, Critisim always welcomed (actually, it's needed)
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2nd Verse - Infinite aka Mutual
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the talkin over the hooks kind of annoying and why is the beat so low???? and is mutual sayin shit during ur verse??? rushed a bit on the last part of ur verse... and i'm sorry i can't stand to listen to mutual... lol i'm sorry... but i can't... i dunno it seems like u guys werent on flow... but thats IMO... newayz it was okay...

give it a 5/10

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LOL -- Thanks for peepin' Lawgz...
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if your audio was better i think ur verse would sound pretty good the very end fell off a lil but overall its not bad just find a way to make it sound better as far as for the other dude no hate but flow and lyrics need some work
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JHaze wrote:if your audio was better i think ur verse would sound pretty good the very end fell off a lil but overall its not bad just find a way to make it sound better as far as for the other dude no hate but flow and lyrics need some work
J- I always appreciate your replies. Thanks man.
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Lawgix wrote: and i'm sorry i can't stand to listen to mutual... lol i'm sorry... but i can't...
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aye man thats okay alotta people dont like it thats why i stopped doing audio's for now one becus nobody likes the accent lol and i cant be bothered

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u try man so A for effort...
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Re: Riggz n Infinite "Takin' My Ball - The Remix"

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lol i will keep tryin but not till i get a MUCH Better mic
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