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HOT SHIIIT

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I Hang with thugs that'll bang this club like a new hit
i use clips to shoot kids, you dont have a clue bitch
i'm hotter then whores, i'm hotter then before
your gettin screwed with vicious tools while sippin juice... i'm spittin cool and you can tell this is cruel
fuckuhoes i'm the best of the best, i put the tec-to-ya-chest.. ur not reppin a set.//
i'll shake you like shakira's hips, you a bitch with a big clit, i get chips dont try to diss kid....
i'm rippin dudes hittin crews, mothafuckas get scared when they see me in there livin room..
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Re: NOT SO HOT SHIIIT

Post by The Gonz »

Eh. Nothing special. There were some multies. That about sums it up.
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Meh, It came pretty hard, but nothing too special!

try to expand your vocab!!
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Re: HOT SHIIIT

Post by Riggz »

...hell, i'd just shoot you if I saw you in my living room.

expand your mind Goon... oops I mean Fuckahoe... :?
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Re: HOT SHIIIT

Post by Mass Effex »

It was alright, pretty basic and generic, try to expand to talk about different shit other than what you'll do and what you can do, just don't give up. There's a difference between talking about how awesome you claim to be, and talking about your life in the hood, which is a much different and more acceptable concept.
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Re: HOT SHIIIT

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thanks ya
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