Wandering MInd (Relationships and Junk)

[QwarterZ]

All I do is wait n ponder, try to escape my problems
touch on nothin', hate n prosper, as my days'll faulter
I am starting to chase a alter, like dating Karma
but she don't love me so my own acclaim is mortality
dating god's within the core family
some say it's incest I debate on it but don't ingest
taste but in quest, I follow all I can finesse
create a alternate...universe
usin' verse as a bridge to the heavens
hopin' in night's moonlight she'd pay attention
what come's about is a lil' less then lesson
so I spiral into a lessen'd depression
sunk lower, feelin' innane, drunk, sober
twirling in a abyss while I duck the nova's
rebirth lives without deceit leavin' me fuck'd over
plus the boulders get moved by the Titan
reciting life n death in the same writing
love is life but death in the same incited
insight is....harder when you don't know what it is
but she can taste blood like a busted lip
before I'd wait just to get the bust unclip'd
like a coupon...literally I let loose on...
till I fold her legs up....a futon...
as I cruise on my world becomes dispersed with friendship
haters in the circle, squared out and indented
the pushin' me into a corner empty, shitlike, septic
hit like threats when your first child goes missin'
I don't know whether to go with it, or weave out those split ends?
I feel stupid tho' cuz sometimes I really don't get it?
how you a friend but have the audacity to bring me down?
fluck it I'm thru and I ain't even goin' to stick with these clowns....

sometimes I think the world against me but that's just my ego....
separted from soul, but set on the same pedestal, so equal....

[- Mutual -]

mayne couldnt get the flow on this but it was aiight got better towards the end at the beggining this seemed more of a poem read rap than spittin but it was still nice hope you return the feed Joey Piff & Mutual

[The Gonz]

This was decent. Not the best I've seen from you, but different lol. The flow was a little choppy in places and some of the rhymes were off just a touch, but I could still go through it. The topics were fairly random, you seemed to touch on a few different ideas. Could still use some work, but I'm not gonna go into too much detail since I know you can do better. Keep droppin em, playa.