Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

everywhere i go

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
2chain
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 18
Joined: Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:11 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 3

everywhere i go

Post by 2chain »

I seen a lot of hate of places where i put my feet on
punkers cant stand it how i shine with my cream on
come on dear suckers and lovers is this all you want
to hate on someone you dont be, who's rebelius strong
i dont collabarate, been making my own tracks with lyrical bombs
go hard or go home, you never make it out here alive without spirtiual longs
im the rookie of the year, been punching hot to prepare for the mediastorm
never messing with the hype, cuz i just want the money to cut off
see everywhere i go, they eyes attached to me like a oparation fault
my vocals or magical hitters to split you brains into suckerclonts
b4 i release the coons, i be waiting for my buttler boy
so i dont have to serve you with the hyper noice
that bitch made me crazy, cant stop thinking about it
she's on my mind, better meet her before its to late to get round it
hottest newbie on the streets, you better respect it
check it, checkmate in playa position, im wreckless
give me a couple of seconds and i make the croud breathless
standing ovation in the hardest way, i make the girls yelling
i want to be with you and im like 1 night or never
thats just how i settle
Lyrics can describe your feelings when your down
User avatar
Frank Black
Rhyme Master
Offline
Posts: 206
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 8:48 pm
Wins: 4
Losses: 6
No Shows: 1
Location: Teaneck
Contact:

Re: everywhere i go

Post by Frank Black »

not very lyrical buh seems like an audio peice to me.
good flow straight to the point very consistent.
Follow Me @GMNFrank

www.reverbnation.com/sdollaz
"2 Comma Kid " SEPT 15th
"My Umi"
DEC 20th
User avatar
2chain
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 18
Joined: Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:11 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 3

Re: everywhere i go

Post by 2chain »

thanks, thats how i made it on a beat
Lyrics can describe your feelings when your down
User avatar
QwarterZ
Rap Professional
Offline
Posts: 1688
Joined: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:01 am
Wins: 4
Losses: 9

Re: everywhere i go

Post by QwarterZ »

This was purdy tight...had a crazy vibe
nice choice in words and very potent realism

that bitch made me crazy, cant stop thinking about it
she's on my mind, better meet her before its to late to get round it
^^^This was nice

towards the end it gave me more of a pimp'd out vibe
then when it started nonetheless dope piece!
User avatar
2chain
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 18
Joined: Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:11 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 3

Re: everywhere i go

Post by 2chain »

thanks for the feed
Lyrics can describe your feelings when your down
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests