still D-E-F

[eMCee Havic]

Ayo

still...

ayo

still def with the scripts
electric wit this
have my enemies.. resting in piss
str8 left in a ditch
while im sexing they bitch
and my preference is this
weapons is dipped
in amonia nitrate to lessen the stick
the lesson in this
in every session i spit
i touching breasts and then tits
you testing the shit
homie..
not a fake or a phoney
fuck you snakes and ya crownies
never loney the one and the only
have ya girl stroke me
slowly theres no way you hold me
back..


still..
revolutionary bombs and bats
i cause attacks
on police that still got balls attached
i pause an blast
as i launch mah raps
hacks, think they can fade this
i'm str8 outrageous
lyrics contagious you contain this
you basic, and i'm the truth
and my rhymes are new
its time 2 shoot
as i'm finding you
in my cross hairs i allign the shute
and then say bye to you

hah ha

just a keystyle to still d.r.e

[Riggz]

hmmmm, something about this structure I don't like man. Seems rather simplistic. Not sure if you're just experimenting with this multi-syllable flow or it's what you do; but if anything, I'd work on the structure and complexity. Again, the flow was there but it seemed like a simple verse with not much depth or concept behind it... just words thrown together.