Shining Down

[QwarterZ]

Maybe I need a bit more clarity, a lil' bit a visionary
clear eyes incendiary, I toss it amongst theives n then I bury
my hopes n dreams in the weary, withered notebook in which I carry
I was told if I vary from the road in which dominions marry
then my opinions scary, or it's more like my opinions varied
all their spits is clear-lay, milk basked all I shit is dairy
call him intolerant, lactose, burpin' up the molotov, crack flows
edit his program callin' it asshole, don't shit ramadan plataeu
I feel so good I'm shifting clouds, look up and spitting down
move quicker then hitting rounds, shed quicker emitting clout
I stand tall when I'm sitting down, with all my lyrics Shining Down....

Heavenly in essence defintly a presence
desperately defensive beheading adolesence
Shining Down....Shining Down on youuuuuu


LOL I don't know random ass ish just weaved together...don't know if it goes with the actual track but who the fluck cares I'm still here

[-MenaCe-]

Maybe I need a bit more clarity, a lil' bit a visionary
clear eyes incendiary, I toss it amongst theives n then I bury
my hopes n dreams in the weary, withered notebook in which I carry
I was told if I vary from the road in which dominions marry
then my opinions scary, or it's more like my opinions varied
all their spits is clear-lay, milk basked all I shit is dairy
-Ok scheme..Not bad


call him intolerant, lactose, burpin' up the molotov, crack flows
edit his program callin' it asshole, don't shit ramadan plataeu
-Nice Shit right there...

I feel so good I'm shifting clouds, look up and spitting down
move quicker then hitting rounds, shed quicker emitting clout
I stand tall when I'm sitting down, with all my lyrics Shining Down....
-Nice Ending Bars..Feelin It

Heavenly in essence defintly a presence
desperately defensive beheading adolesence
Shining Down....Shining Down on youuuuuu

This Drop actually had some nice lines in it. i was feelin how you flipped it kid ya wordplay was Nice and ya kept everything consistant. good Drop keep em comin man, your doin good keep up the good work.



return the favor and leave feed on my drop.

[Riggz]

QZ, I will say honestly.. you improve with every drop man... Unlike Men- I felt the beginning was the strongest.. I just liked the way you opened it. I can imagine someone coming on stage, looking the crowd dead in the eyes, grabbing the mic.. and saying "Maybe I need a bit more clarity..." (as the base line hits right after the last syllable of clarity)...Haha, that would be coooool!

Riggz

[Mass Effex]

Maybe I need a bit more clarity, a lil' bit a visionary
clear eyes incendiary, I toss it amongst theives n then I bury

Kind of a weak multi, good concept though

my hopes n dreams in the weary, withered notebook in which I carry
I was told if I vary from the road in which dominions marry

Good multi, decent flow, deep concept

then my opinions scary, or it's more like my opinions varied
all their spits is clear-lay, milk basked all I shit is dairy

Bad multi at the end, good flow, weak punch


call him intolerant, lactose, burpin' up the molotov, crack flows
edit his program callin' it asshole, don't shit ramadan plataeu

Liked this

I feel so good I'm shifting clouds, look up and spitting down
move quicker then hitting rounds, shed quicker emitting clout

Alright line, it works

I stand tall when I'm sitting down, with all my lyrics Shining Down....

Heavenly in essence defintly a presence
desperately defensive beheading adolesence
Shining Down....Shining Down on youuuuuu


LOL I don't know random ass ish just weaved together...don't know if it goes with the actual track but who the fluck cares I'm still here

Overall nice piece. Decently deep, and pretty good flow.
Nice multi attempts and a lot of multi successes. Keep droppin'