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YOU HAVE NO IT

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I'll let you figure out who this is aimed towards.

Overwhelming hypocrite, verbally and mentally
think you a rebel cause you watch a Michael Moore documentary
act like ya saves lives, like a D-O-C
when you're the real traitor the G-O-V
the criminal saying the other criminal's wrong
I've seen subliminal shit you should have seen all along
typical media pawn, songs make you a god
in the eyes of the narrow minded thinking abroad
you say you rape, kill, give so much pain
then shit on the U.S. when you're really the same
speak about the new world and it's order
ya ego thrives cause you think you're the only informer
corrupted, except intentions are worse
you help no one who all you do is hate in your verse
wait till the fog dies, and your vision is clearer
and you'll find the fuckin' devil when you look in the mirror

edit:Maybe I should spell check first next time. lol
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Quix :shock:
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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immortal technique? idk thats my best guess
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yeh gotta be immortal technique
I drop more dope than fucking top shotters
call me korean meatballs coz im the dogs bollox
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Yep. IT.

Title:YOU HAVE NO I(mmortal)T(Technique)
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Yup immortal it is...


I think also
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How bout feedback and not just a guessing game?
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Lol here I was thinking it was someone from this site... whoops. Anyways, shit was good. Had some good hits, nice flow, multies were pretty straight. Nice shit, holmes.
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This was nice I ain't even gon' quote anything
cuz the flow of errything just goes together nicely
I was feeling it my dude, keep writing!
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Decent Drop Tho Mass..
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