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Haz
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Itch 1 ..

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Your Inner Moron's Will Slowly Kill
Cause Your Senseless Fags & Nosy still!
Oh B Rill, My Weight is Beyond a Diggie
That's Joey's Dill,My Dick Flow'll Give
a Goose Bumpz Like "You Owe Me Chillz??"
Half You Cat's Only Fill Need To Enjoy
Plastic Surgeons Hands..Phony Skills..
I'm No Poser As i Grow Older i Realize
a Cold Soldier Will Get The Cold Shoulder
My Skills Don't get Wreck Ignition Like a
Key less Bold Dozer,So i'm Sold Sober,they
Don't Buy Me High Thinking They Get By Me
Try To Paint That Picture i'ma Rochead
Who Wnt BREAK! i Maintain 'Crack Fixtures..
They Say Talk With The Devil U Walk With The
Rebel's,Run From Nuthin N Bury Chalk With The
Pebbles,Competition's Budds N i Blow Um Away
Till The 'Coughin is Settled, Six Feet Deep..
Don't Need Ammo But When it Comes 2 Rounds all
i Need is Three Niggaz Like Six Feet Creep ..
I Pitch Heat Streaks Like a Athletic Titan,
a Verse Is a Ring N Theres Hectic Fighting
i've Gone Thru "Champs" I Won't Walk In They
Shoes I'm At The 'Finish Line' Vets Feeling
Awkward With BOO'S!! i'm The Teacher Spittin
Ether Anyone Can Intercept A Lesson, Start
Testing,I'm The Server you just Got Internet
Connection,i'm Not Inta Death's Deception
a Loss Of Beat is Not My End i've Went In
Acapella in Various Parking Lots My Friend..
I Just Load, Unload Then Switch Gun's,Pitch Ton's
Of Hazard Into a Bitch Lungs, i'm Far From Backpack
Tryna Avoid My Flashbacks This is just Itch One ..
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token jesture
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Re: Itch 1 ..

Post by token jesture »

this is dope, but the flow flacks here n ther, like tha one said it may jus be me not gettting the structure right but never the less i liked it man, gonna go peep ur ova drop now
I drop more dope than fucking top shotters
call me korean meatballs coz im the dogs bollox
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JHaze
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Post by JHaze »

i agree eith a lot of the feedback above bro, u deffinitely have some nice lines but the flows a lil shaky in some parts. either way good drop man keep em comin'
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