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Streets Is All I Know

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new song i did recently.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZWjZgRy4wh0

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Re: Streets Is All I Know

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this is pretty cool... audio is HORRIBLE... its warbly... u've gotten better.... flow wise and with ur lyrics too man... good shit besides the warble of the audio... give it a 6.5/10

peace man try not postin it thru youtube nemore... try like mediafire or even adding it as an attachment on IL... maybe that will make it sound better...
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Re: Streets Is All I Know

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Ayo i'll be honest man i liked it...
The beat was pretty solid slow but alotta feelin..

the hook was actually pretty good..well imo could've been great if it was done better..aight though..

the verses had some crazy effect on it ..i think thats what Law's talkin bout..it actually takes a lil bit of emotion away from your total deliv..imo...lyrically i thought it was pretty good though..4 real ..this ones def better then the last track i peep'd with you on it...keep doin ya thing.
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Re: Streets Is All I Know

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yeah this was nice art from it's on youtube and the audio sucks on youtube on most videos nice hook and the verses were consistent so nice job Tram
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Re: Streets Is All I Know

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ya idk wtf was up with that shit tho,cuz before i recorded that i had somethin else i was workin on and it didnt have that shit on it. i dont use effects. if i do its a very slight re-verb but i didnt this time at all. idkk. it didnt do it lastnight when i was recordin soo idk,but ty for all the feed!
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