Fuck it...its Viral

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 7:41 am

no structure...shouldnt need one...read...leave feedback...id appreciate it...i MIGHT drop more writtens...we'll see how i feel

im 18, my slates clean, u faggots wanna up n try to take me off this plate..but u bout to starve to death ill make the larva spread till it makes ur carcus bread n watch me eat it up wit no country spred, this monkeys meds have been finished mental diminished, rabid teeth grabbin u like popeye his spinach, its sickness how i spit six blips makin ur heart skip like sniffin arsenic ima partial prick the rest is kickin martial fits, ima start the show the flow aint slow ill b at da end before it begins...makin it snow, i contain that of 9 demons the signs screamin to let me out dont send ya scouts 1st bout n i got ice comin thru ya snout makin men pout bodies left limp carried down south...im out now no need to shout loud, im noticed no matter wat so next batter up prepare to get shattered wit a clatter of scattered sluts, beatin u down bloody stingin in ur face these hoes love me, i never leave my house without mah budddyyy..deflect deez shots or get sectioned in slots magic trick gone wrong got ur dick connected on top, by the way my names viral, and no u cant get rid of me, its synergy wen u respond to me, its cuz im takin ya over worse den HIV, wanna be coo? then ya better act real, i sense the fake n will leave ya corpse dead in a lake, i cut the rhymes down but i dont seem so devine now...let me rewind...how? by veerin ya ears causin a surround sound, i dont really care to grow up underground is my town, i shock crowds wit lyrics so sick it makes em bow down, ive officially flipped the switch, random is now my everyday personality, i wont stop wen u say so...now i got this person mad at me...its worse than tragedies, sad to see so many rappers gettin killed over simple things its jst insanity, i stay a day ahead of u, the way i spray some heads r rude, all in all viral will get the best of u, expose ur inner weakness thinkin u can beat this so much heat the street melts beneath ya feet kids, congratulate me disses wont saturate me..see to be V u gotta stay careless like bush wit his own education, talkin back will get ur face placed in a safe wit a device for excavation, clock these words n see the nation start racin, lose ur heart cuz these racists rnt pacin, come to my crib n see wat im facin...i got everybody wonderin y im so explosive like C4 used for masturbation

EDIT: heres the link so 8th dont have an ass spasm

http://illestlyrics.com/board/deeper-th ... t2470.html

8th · Post by **8th** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 10:18 am

EDIT: heres the link so 8th dont have an ass spasm

your an admin as well. that rule is now a site rule, so you should enforce it to. its not just me.

and if you separate that verse into some type of structure, ill read and drop feed.

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 11:24 am

lol 8th, shut up. umm nice drop i liked it i guess but it wasnt structured to well, felt like i was readin an essay, and i didnt too much like how you switched up the rhyming unexpectedly here and there but had some ill lines and rhyming, dont quite get the topic but ok, overall pretty decent.

8th · Post by **8th** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 1:16 pm

i wasnt talking to you.

speak when spoken to.

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 3:25 pm

8th wrote:i wasnt talking to you.

speak when spoken to.

uve really started to act like ur superior.....its sad...ADMIN is gettin to ur head...get over urself

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:30 pm

8th wrote:i wasnt talking to you.

speak when spoken to.

lol well r u speaking to him now?

i agree with viral tho... i understand its a rule that should be enforced.. but it'd come in handy alot more in battles instead of writtens..

and btw.. not sure if its u.. but whoever's pasting the link in those who forget..how r u gonna get them to post a link if ur just gonna do it for them...

8th · Post by **8th** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 12:16 am

i dont think im superior than anyone. 16 micz just has beef we me cause i made one off hand comment, and im just gettin sick of him telling me to shut up. [that commen about speak when spoken to was refering to him] i was just tryin to help with the rule, and it did. admin is getting to my head? are you joking? and the reason i figured i'd put it in writtens, is there are more writtens then battles. you wouldn't always have a battle to vote on. and i have no problems with anyone on this site but viral. and i guess 16 micz if he continues to want to make a big deal out of nothing, but if he doesnt then we have no problem.

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 12:21 am

Ekoms its a fact the rule has helped considerably. Everyone is getting feedback.

RizPekT · Post by **RizPekT** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 1:27 am

^ yes but who's to say that it's useful feedback...ppl will jus write anything so they can drop a verse if u think about it but i guess it's the best u can do....

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 2:31 am

btw.. n e of u check if ppl been using the same link just to drop verses lol.. cuz if not then i guess i just ruined n e ideas about it

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 5:08 am

shut up 8th

good verse viral

precise · Post by **precise** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 11:56 pm

word, haha, shut up 8th

liked the verse, the "visual" structure of it doesnt need to be fixed up cause the rhyme structure held it down. entertainin shit dude

8th · Post by **8th** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 12:11 am

^thats right, follow the leader.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 5:23 am

(Follows) Shut up 8th, 9th, 10th

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 7:17 pm

EkomS wrote:btw.. n e of u check if ppl been using the same link just to drop verses lol.. cuz if not then i guess i just ruined n e ideas about it

Yeah im usually checking that.

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