Long time no drops

[EvilJoey]

Lookin into my Ex's Eyes as i stab my last pen Inside...
Then Perhaps jenn would cry...
im Lauhin as she Gasps... Grapsin that.... she then would
die!
fuck Murder... These verses are mass Gen- O- Cide
Shit I makes a living at Killin Whores...
So Call my Number when ur no longer Feelin Yours..
my verses tell ya a thousand ways To Merk... but i know a
millions more
It just takes Practice.. but what the fuck else are Civilians for?
Evil vs joey... the Contest of Blood and villains
And whos Spillin More?

u thought joey was Evil? Well theres Fuckin Demons inside
Him...
And once hes Dreamin N vibe-in // u Homos will be
Screamin & hide-in//
All the weapons of mine u find are toys..
Sex Killin N rhymes ... Are the only things my Mind Enjoys..
urged to kill..
lookin through radio and all i find is noise...
My mind is poised...
to detroy time and Joy...
Murder pays ....its hard times and Crime employs...
So remember That next time ur Thinkin of dropin a diss..
i'm lookin for people Hit... and youll be Toppin the list
my options are sick.. i can write me a verse.. or 'come off
the top like a brisk'
yes thats a Jewish cir-cum-cision...
Im sick as fuck... n u wish ur condition... was Merkin
Diction...
Im twitchin from my verb addiction... Im absurd with
fiction..
keepin it -locked down- like ur 3rd conviction..
i'm Smashin any fagot whos text is avarage....
The passionate Dyslectic Savage
Fuckin with Heads.... like havin sex with Cabbage

[Mass Effex]

Lookin into my Ex's Eyes as i stab my last pen Inside...
Then Perhaps jenn would cry...
im Lauhin as she Gasps... Grapsin that.... she then would
die!
fuck Murder... These verses are mass Gen- O- Cide

Decent Multies. I could feel the emotion from it.

Shit I makes a living at Killin Whores...
So Call my Number when ur no longer Feelin Yours..
my verses tell ya a thousand ways To Merk... but i know a
millions more
It just takes Practice.. but what the fuck else are Civilians for?
Evil vs joey... the Contest of Blood and villains
And whos Spillin More?

Good multies, flow jumped around, but was good when it matched


u thought joey was Evil? Well theres Fuckin Demons inside
Him...
And once hes Dreamin N vibe-in // u Homos will be
Screamin & hide-in//

Once again with the multies. Didn't really feel this line though.

All the weapons of mine u find are toys..
Sex Killin N rhymes ... Are the only things my Mind Enjoys..

I felt this line, once again, I felt the emotion behind it.

urged to kill..
lookin through radio and all i find is noise...
My mind is poised...
to detroy time and Joy...
Murder pays ....its hard times and Crime employs...

Overplayed on describing the subject. Once again I must say you did good with these multies. Flow was decent.

So remember That next time ur Thinkin of dropin a diss..
i'm lookin for people Hit... and youll be Toppin the list
my options are sick.. i can write me a verse.. or 'come off
the top like a brisk'

Above average punch and wordplay.

yes thats a Jewish cir-cum-cision...
Im sick as fuck... n u wish ur condition... was Merkin
Diction...
Im twitchin from my verb addiction... Im absurd with
fiction..
keepin it -locked down- like ur 3rd conviction..

Didn't really feel it for some reason. "So-So" metaphor


i'm Smashin any fagot whos text is avarage....
The passionate Dyslectic Savage
Fuckin with Heads.... like havin sex with Cabbage

Good vocab and great multy, but a little over the top on the last punch

Overall, you seemed to jumped around as far as the subject goes, it seemed like these were two different parts of seperate drops. I thought it was pretty well done overall. You did a great job on your multies and the flow was pretty decent. Keep dropping.

[The Gonz]

Lol bout time your ass drops something. Like Mass said, the multies were on point. I didn't see too many issues with the flow, I think it was the format. Some strange shit you talked about, but that shit is normal for you lol. Good to see you're still writing. Now just work on being more active, faggot.

[EvilJoey]

Yea...


ok on this shit here.. yea i jump topics i write like i cypher...

Uhhh... The Format... hmm yes well u see when i did this in Word or what ever it was layed out much better.. Cut n paste dosnt like me much cuz doing so fucked it all up and i was lazy and didnt fix it.



Thx for feed... And Ruck i been matching the amount of posts u Do...
Mabey u should be more active! lol

[JHaze]

good stuff man i agree with the dudes above the multies are there and some nice lines here and there, content has already been mentioned, umm yea but anyway i liked this, and i think ive seen u on a few other forums, keep droppin