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You the type of playa that was known for your work
Back bone for the turf, never got thrown in the dirt
While haters tried to keep U down like boners in church
Cuz they know U the worst, tightest homie that I ever had
Only knew to get your cash, cheddar stacked remember that?
Too many sore days, but we’d hang around and sit
Crew playin 4 tay while U was down with Quik
I’ll be around to rip, glock on the hip sittin on chrome
Tryin to pocket shit, and leave this industry blown
I can write livin, take a trip uptown to stick my dick in white women
Put the pipe in em all day then they let me stayin overnight
Then to the slums I covered the bottom like an over bite
And rock em while I hold the mic, too hot to put they soul on ice
Too abstract for yall, coming fast unloadin ion blastin yall
Feelin defeat, I’m brining the heat like Miama basketball
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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Gutta wrote:You the type of playa that was known for your work
Back bone for the turf, never got thrown in the dirt
While haters tried to keep U down like boners in church

The boners in church part made me laugh, good multies in this line


Cuz they know U the worst, tightest homie that I ever had
Only knew to get your cash, cheddar stacked remember that?

Decent line with a decent multy, wasn't really feeling the flow


Too many sore days, but we’d hang around and sit
Crew playin 4 tay while U was down with Quik
I’ll be around to rip, glock on the hip sittin on chrome
Tryin to pocket shit, and leave this industry blown

Really felt the last line, good multy once again and great job on the flow here

Put the pipe in em all day then they let me stayin overnight
Then to the slums I covered the bottom like an over bite
And rock em while I hold the mic, too hot to put they soul on ice

Multy on the first part seemed a little off but the last part made up for it. Decent flow.



Too abstract for yall, coming fast unloadin ion blastin yall
Feelin defeat, I’m brining the heat like Miami basketball

Liked the multy and the reference, good closer.

You brought a consistent flow and had good multies along with a good opening and good closing. Also, I was really feelin the punches you had in there. This would sound good on some audio, maybe on a mobb deep kind of beat.

I still got that audio you recorded on that 8-track from way back when we did that shook ones remix. lol
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hit me up nigga im in your hood again
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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I'm in Boston now.
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Nice shit Kid...I felt this shit. BAck on yah Street shit huh doggy?
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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This was pretty good. Liked the multies and flow. Has a nice little swag to it.
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