Found some old keys layin around

[TekniQ]

Some shit I keyed up a long time ago.. Geoshitties is closing down so I was lookin at all my old shit in there and I found a few flows from way back. Fuck it.


Peep..


So tell me hip-hop, how many cats d'ya know Who'd Box God n Laugh
Slaughter Cats & Put Out Tracks worth more than Tupacs Autograph?

Speedily Muffle kids when my fist hits cheek in the Heat of a Tussle
& if someone says my shits weak, I show em my Feces Have Muscles

Bloody Brains wit Ruptured Veins cover my Victims Broken Caskets
cuz I Roped their Throats Closed to Sew the Thickest Open Gashes

Soaked in Gasses they Gasped, their neck Severed Wit A Clean Hack
So ya Best Believe your Teams Cats'll start Beggin Me For Feedback

The Best is Where? I may be new but you'll Respect Your Next Heir
take a Breath of Fresh Air.. cuz I drop so cold it Erects Ya Neck Hair

Came to the Booth to prove to you kids I'm lyrically Raidin the Youth
Statin the Truth, you'd think I was Atlas.. the way Im Raisin the Roof

Slice Nerds to Precise Turds with sick punches Bearing Nice Verbs
Ive been reigning over rhyme since father time was Wearing Diapers




Aight, I'ma hit the store. Might drop some more when I get back. Hit me wit some feed on this for now... always appreciate it.


-$aw

[-MenaCe-]

Peep..


So tell me hip-hop, how many cats d'ya know Who'd Box God n Laugh
Slaughter Cats & Put Out Tracks worth more than Tupacs Autograph?
-Nice Opener, Im feelin that...

Speedily Muffle kids when my fist hits cheek in the Heat of a Tussle
& if someone says my shits weak, I show em my Feces Have Muscles
-Good Wordplay and creativity....

Bloody Brains wit Ruptured Veins cover my Victims Broken Caskets
cuz I Roped their Throats Closed to Sew the Thickest Open Gashes
-Nice Multi's, Flow was on point, Bar Landed nice..

Soaked in Gasses they Gasped, their neck Severed Wit A Clean Hack
So ya Best Believe your Teams Cats'll start Beggin Me For Feedback
-OK, Kinda filler...

The Best is Where? I may be new but you'll Respect Your Next Heir
take a Breath of Fresh Air.. cuz I drop so cold it Erects Ya Neck Hair
-Ok....

Came to the Booth to prove to you kids I'm lyrically Raidin the Youth
Statin the Truth, you'd think I was Atlas.. the way Im Raisin the Roof
-I like the wordplay but line isn't all that great..

Slice Nerds to Precise Turds with sick punches Bearing Nice Verbs
Ive been reigning over rhyme since father time was Wearing Diapers
-Not your best line but "OK"....





This Drop wasn't bad at all man im feelin ya wordplay and your flow even ya punches
hit a bit hard here and i can tell you can throw Em...Good Drop Saw...Keep Em Comin..

[The Gonz]

Not bad. You've got some potential. I'll be looking for more material from you, hopefully something other than old keys.

[JHaze]

Some nice lines in here man, a few dope punches and your flow is pretty consistent the whole through, good shit man i'd like to see more from you

[complexity]

Some shit I keyed up a long time ago.. Geoshitties is closing down so I was lookin at all my old shit in there and I found a few flows from way back. Fuck it.


Peep..


So tell me hip-hop, how many cats d'ya know Who'd Box God n Laugh
Slaughter Cats & Put Out Tracks worth more than Tupacs Autograph?

Sick

Speedily Muffle kids when my fist hits cheek in the Heat of a Tussle
& if someone says my shits weak, I show em my Feces Have Muscles

Nah. I don't like this at all.

Bloody Brains wit Ruptured Veins cover my Victims Broken Caskets
cuz I Roped their Throats Closed to Sew the Thickest Open Gashes

Creative

Soaked in Gasses they Gasped, their neck Severed Wit A Clean Hack
So ya Best Believe your Teams Cats'll start Beggin Me For Feedback

No. He's wack! I'm kidding.

The Best is Where? I may be new but you'll Respect Your Next Heir
take a Breath of Fresh Air.. cuz I drop so cold it Erects Ya Neck Hair

Ok

Came to the Booth to prove to you kids I'm lyrically Raidin the Youth
Statin the Truth, you'd think I was Atlas.. the way Im Raisin the Roof

Alright

Slice Nerds to Precise Turds with sick punches Bearing Nice Verbs
Ive been reigning over rhyme since father time was Wearing Diapers

No


Aight, I'ma hit the store. Might drop some more when I get back. Hit me wit some feed on this for now... always appreciate it.


-$aw

Go ahead and drop more. This was pretty decent. Half good, half not so good. I'd give it a 6.8/10.