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heelp if you care or can

-- Fri Sep 18, 2009 1:47 pm --

accidental i download it 2 times
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help wat
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help to finish this beat
i had toughs to leave it this way but i hoped that some 1 from here have idea to upgrade it

-- Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:39 am --

i meant that accidentally i upload it 2 times
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o i have no beat editing stuff so i would but i really cant
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thats ok.

-- Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:33 am --

did you like it?beat i mean
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im on my phone so i havent got a chance to hear it ill check it out when i get to my cpu
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do ya'll new dudes even like glance at the forum sections before you post? or do you just headbutt your mouse and go with it? this is the audio battles section you posted a four bar loop of james brown grunting that isn't even looped right (how the fuck can't you hear that awkward pause?) and ask people to upgrade it? lmao wtf

vocals make the beat unusable pretty much its not looped even close to right & the sample basslines pretty bland & boring, if you're going to do anything to this at least loop it right you'd probably be better off just resampling another part of the track cause this just sounds like a clusterfuck of awkward and annoyingness after the 2nd or 3rd offbeat loop
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well i dont think ima look at it after dat review
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you are wrong fake jesus its not browns grunge its shaban bajramovic ja se budim song!!! and its looped exactly how i wanted...and that loop is just back up (that can be removed easy) ...there is bass line (that you proably didnt hear coz you edited over some cranky lap top device)..

-- Tue Sep 22, 2009 10:16 am --

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P.T.R-ins wrote:you are wrong fake jesus its not browns grunge its shaban bajramovic ja se budim song!!! and its looped exactly how i wanted...and that loop is just back up (that can be removed easy) ...there is bass line (that you proably didnt hear coz you edited over some cranky lap top device)..

-- Tue Sep 22, 2009 10:16 am --
apparently you suck at reading just as much as you do at posting, i don't give a fuck who it is the grunting sounds like james brown (i never said browns grunge lmao)

its looped exactly how you wanted? its not even looped don't you hear that awkward pause? lmao

and i said the bassline is boring and bland i didn't say their wasn't a bassline are you retarded or something? and i listened to it i didn't "edit" it, learn english assclown
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lol
you are funny...
dam you probably spend a lot of time learning that hilarious humor lines...
pauses are place where something is missing..any way i did not have intentions to argue with you..
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I'm sorry but i would just throw this away... it's awful.... i mean would you ever rap over that really? no one would listen to it haha

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i di ...lol i tried to rap over it just to show that JH is mistaking...damm shit he was on point:D
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honestly... this is hot garbage... wow....
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