When it rains it Pours

[Haz]

Look

They Tell Me I Gotta Pay Up With Day To Day Cream
How The Fuck i'm 33 Thousand Dollars in Debt at Eighteen
Most Likely Identity Theft,As a Kid Thought My Identity Left
Found a Piece Of Me Finding Peace Fa Me..Living Decently..
Till This Bullshit Avalanched Thanks To a Faggot Branch
Who Couldn't Get 'Real' If He Had a Chance..Always Jumpin
Around Heads Like a Savage Dance..i Swear Nothing Makes Sense
That's Pretty Ironic Why Knuckling Up ain't git Me On Sonic
why'd i Take a Hit of The Chronic To create a Strip Of a Comic?
Flipping Through The Same Page Getz Me Flippin Due To Insane Rage,
Shifting Views Into a Chained Cage..Ventilation Behind Bars
16 Bars is 32 lines of Disguised Scare's.. i Strive Hard Like
A Fiend Explaining To Rock,I Set Flame's To A Pot,Till This
Investing Cars And I'm 'Gaining A Lot' Am i Sane Or Am i Not?
That's the Question cause These Fucking People Attachd To Weapons
Conducting Evil Put Me Passed Depression,Fuck a Sequel,Fuck A Lesson
i Feel Like i Got My Major For Spotting Haters Who R like bad seeds N got Rotten Nature..
i Won't Give Up i Must Sacrifice To The Devil like he was on the Cross and Christ Threw the pebbles
i'm Giving advice To The Rebels Think Twice N Sink Life Into ya
Mind Then take Flight of Levels..Go At ya Struggle till It Tents Out n Ya
Fight'll Settle....
I've Remained In a War With Pain It's Scored It's Gains
Never Took a Loss Cause i've Always Lost My Mind durin Pouring Rain..



When it Rains its pours
i Picture pain till my brain is sore..
When it Rains it Pours
its Like life's lanes a tour.
When it Rains it pours..
I Arrange for war ..
A Dozen Roses layed down
when it rains its pours..

[TekniQ]

Deeeeep shit, Ambition. It felt like a few parts were a little choppy, but the depth and imagery made up for it. That was definately some real shit. Interesting rhyme scheme, I might add. Keep the drops comin fam.


$aw

[JHaze]

This is dope man, i love it when people put real shit in there music im feelin this, i think you could reword some parts to flow a lil better but other than that this is dope

That's Pretty Ironic Why Knuckling Up ain't git Me On Sonic
why'd i Take a Hit of The Chronic To create a Strip Of a Comic?
Flipping Through The Same Page Getz Me Flippin Due To Insane Rage,
Shifting Views Into a Chained Cage..Ventilation Behind Bars
16 Bars is 32 lines of Disguised Scare's..

nice^ keep droppin