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Re: Desperado

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Thank you for the feed bruthas.

Once I get settled into the new spot, I'll be able to deliver a few more goodies.
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Re: Desperado

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I Like The Lay Back Vibe Of This Track, It Sounds Like It Could Be A Intro For A Album. As Always Flows On Point, You Seem To Be Improving All Around. I Haven't Been Around For Awhile, So I'm Goina Have To Look Back In The Archives To See What You Been Dropin During My Absence. Keep Up The Solid Work Man, Hope I Can Get You On Another Track In The Future, Peace.
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Re: Desperado

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Kurse wrote:
Hollywood Jesus wrote:listening, you seem to be improving lyrically good shit flow is on point like usual delivery was a lil too bland for my liking but it fit the laid back nature of the beat, beat was ehhh spanish guitar sample was dope but it wasn't bumping properly cause of the weak kick mediocre drumline and no bassline, good to see you still making music homie

btw scarface is a spic so that line doesn't make sense lmao
I appreciate the feed from you guys up to this point. Glad to see that y'all are still feelin the type of vibe that I drop on a track. I've been so busy at work and taking care of business over here that I don't get to share my piece here on illest as much as I used to.

Jesus...Scareface wasn't a spic. (although in the movie someone actually wrongfully termed him as one) Scarface was a Cuban. Cuban's are more known as "wetbacks" ...SPIC is the abbrviated negative term for hiSPanIC, being the term for mexican's! I'm Mex...not Cuban. Most people don't know how to seperate the correct racist terms from where the really belong lol
WORD? Down here in Cali the racial slur "Wetback" is used on the Mexican population, and the word Spic is mostly used against Cubans, Boricuas, etc.

Anyway, on to the track; I actually peeped this on your myspace a lil bit ago (which basically reminded me of this forum, so I came through). Shit was dope. There's always consistency with your tracks, so that'll be a good look for you in the long run. Stay up. 1
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Re: Desperado

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Yea homie this shit was pretty nice.. I usually dont like too much of the gangster shit but this was cool cuz of the chill overtone.. stay up
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