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Cry's N Screams Intro.

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It's Like i was born Into Cry's N Screams..
All the sorrow my eyes have seen,Makes me have the
Highest dreams,Sleep was hard 2 get..so i played
The Smoking Card 2 Rest Still haven't Put that Card 2 Rest
I got shit ball'd up but it's Far From stress..So a Stressball
Doesn't Tickle Me..Losing These Habits Is Victory..
When shit Hits the Fan my Man has a Hit for Me
It's like i Still Haven't Hit My Peak..Shit Is Deep
So Far Down due 2 Staying High Understand The Shit i Speak?
I See Zombies with Eyes Read Like The Bible, No Revival
As Suicidal Through The Trials..They've Gone Through i'm Gone 2
It's hard 2 wait on the World when the Weight of the world is On You
There has to be a right when no options left, cops in stress.buggin
popping tecs so they jogging less..rich wearing snake skin on bods
I Got get it in fa God, Even when i'm Out Of Faith consider me Evans notes on the Route i Take..
i'm gripping a purpose dripping tears is
only hitting the surface..fiends in need of people who'll lead
sinning in churches like the drugs speak sinister verses
theres no helping hands so i feel like the god indians worship
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Re: Cry's N Screams Intro.

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mayne this was some dope shyt imo
had a nice flow to all of it
good multies and metas n shyt
the best lines had to be
As Suicidal Through The Trials..They've Gone Through i'm Gone 2
It's hard 2 wait on the World when the Weight of the world is On You
mayne this was hella nice
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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^^
PRETTY MUCH COSIGN..SHIT WAS ILL.IMO..

It's like i Still Haven't Hit My Peak..Shit Is Deep
So Far Down due 2 Staying High Understand The Shit i Speak?
I See Zombies with Eyes Read Like The Bible, No Revival
As Suicidal Through The Trials..They've Gone Through i'm Gone 2
It's hard 2 wait on the World when the Weight of the world is On You
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I liked this sequence most..i'm, feelin whats being said..1
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$.@MB!T!0N.$ wrote:
It's Like i was born Into Cry's N Screams..
All the sorrow my eyes have seen,Makes me have the
Highest dreams,Sleep was hard 2 get..so i played
The Smoking Card 2 Rest Still haven't Put that Card 2 Rest
I got shit ball'd up but it's Far From stress..So a Stressball
Doesn't Tickle Me..Losing These Habits Is Victory..
When shit Hits the Fan my Man has a Hit for Me

/Nice!

It's like i Still Haven't Hit My Peak..Shit Is Deep
So Far Down due 2 Staying High Understand The Shit i Speak?
I See Zombies with Eyes Read Like The Bible, No Revival
As Suicidal Through The Trials..They've Gone Through i'm Gone 2
It's hard 2 wait on the World when the Weight of the world is On You

/This is really dope wording

There has to be a right when no options left, cops in stress.buggin
popping tecs so they jogging less..rich wearing snake skin on bods
I Got get it in fa God, Even when i'm Out Of Faith consider me Evans notes on the Route i Take..
i'm gripping a purpose dripping tears is
only hitting the surface..fiends in need of people who'll lead
sinning in churches like the drugs speak sinister verses
theres no helping hands so i feel like the god indians worship

/Awesome ending.
Word. This was sick. A few lines that I didn't like, but they lead up to some real dope ones.
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