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*Nero*
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...The Dopeness...

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My Ego's Larger Than Wales-Weight
Rawer Than Stale-Steak,
AND YOU Couldnt "Pop Tops" If You Were "Joseph Francis" At Tail-Gates!!!!

uh...

Punks! You Chumps I Devour-Fast
Ya Spittin Ya Sour-Trash,
While Im Fresher Than A Powdered-Ass "Flyer" Than The Planes "Howard-Crashed"!!!! (howard hughes)

Back Up...

Even Doped-N-High Im Sharper Than Cobra-Bites,
With More "Hits" Than "Sosa's-Life"
Got My Head "Bigger" Than "Oprahs-Eyes"!!!!
Perpetual Thumb-Suck Dumb-Fuck,
Uh, One-Up
Chumps-Luck Gets Me Like Your "Chicks Heals"...ALL "PUMPED-UP"!!!


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Re: ...The Dopeness...

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Yeah .. This is Cool but Not Impressive.
Your Plays were Basic.. N Played in a Sense..


Your Deff a Good Addition To The Site..Keep Doin ya Thing
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Re: ...The Dopeness...

Post by -MenaCe- »

*Nero* wrote:My Ego's Larger Than Wales-Weight
Rawer Than Stale-Steak,
AND YOU Couldnt "Pop Tops" If You Were "Joseph Francis" At Tail-Gates!!!!
-Line made me laugh...decent

uh...

Punks! You Chumps I Devour-Fast
Ya Spittin Ya Sour-Trash,
While Im Fresher Than A Powdered-Ass "Flyer" Than The Planes "Howard-Crashed"!!!! (howard hughes)
-Ok wordplay, line isn't bad..

Back Up...

Even Doped-N-High Im Sharper Than Cobra-Bites,
With More "Hits" Than "Sosa's-Life"
Got My Head "Bigger" Than "Oprahs-Eyes"!!!!
-lol...Ok line funny if anything..

Perpetual Thumb-Suck Dumb-Fuck,
Uh, One-Up
Chumps-Luck Gets Me Like Your "Chicks Heals"...ALL "PUMPED-UP"!!!
-Kinda weak IMO....



Overall Not a bad drop some of the lines are "OK" and your structure is wierd but works for ya..Keep EM comin!


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