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Verbal Perfection - Fall back!

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- BEST DISS (TEXT) OF 2008 -

Quix dah General in dah buildin!



hmm, Hazzard your pure Ass...nough said! and plex...yah should have kept yah Mouth shut!







Verbal Perfection!!









Look nikkuhz..
Imaginary people are dah only dudes this BROTHER FIGHTZ, like made up tranvestites and OTHER DYKES
so SHUT-YOUR PIPEZ! cuz your 'Delivery never seem to cut-it' like Fed Ex Replacin Box Cutters wid BUTTER KNIFES
I'm sonnin Dog, n his Crew After! hate tah break it to you but your Just a FAILURE KID!
you should BAil Quick! or i'm a have you 'Runnin off the stage Faster' than TAYLOR SWIFT
you Probably only PERFORM FOR CRICKETZ! looking stupider and more DEFORMED then MIGIGTS
I'll make a FORUM N STICK-IT! cuz i just 'Killed HAzz before his first Breathe' like ABORTION CLINICS
I'm a Staple your Ears to your Forhead, Why? Because i'm a SCARING OCK WID CERTAINTY
Wid an Urgencey cuz i'm leaving more holes in yah body than ARTHROSCOPIC SURGERY
Everything you spit is Straight TRASH OR LAME! you got no CLASS OR GAME
plus your TRACKZ ARE GAY! your Finished! cuz i'm 'Stronger than this Herb' like CRACK COCAINE
had enough of this GUYS AGGRETION! I'm a Put tah barrel to his skull and watch him FLY TO HEAVEN!
you suck, thats why Cats don't Love you plus i'm in a 'Class above you' like PILOT LESSONS
you think you Cool, well I'm COLDER LITTERALLY! I'm Drunk at mind and olny SOBER PHYSICALLY!
Hazzard, I know you gon Loose cuz i'm a 'show you the Boot! like Flying OVER ITALY!
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Faggotz! now the nail in the coffin!..
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You kids got Murked! you Know this, I Kicked you in dah nutz, left you in Dirt, Exploded!
n Sure we noticed a couple things, like you ain't Swordsmen, more like some verbal Slow Kidz!
n Plex, I was beefin wid HAzz; you should've kept mah name out yah mouth cuz i'M A Beast , your Just Bad!
I'm Deleating you Fagz! n i ain't selling news week or time, but i'll Treat you to Magz
you stay asleep...We Really Living n Visualizing your Dreams! your just VErifying your Weak!
so fuck these Cumps, i'll put your 'WHOLE CLICK on dah Flat-Line' like Minimizing yah screen
Mah Lines Sick, kids be calling them Malariya Rhymez, there Criterias Fine!
I 'Stay wid dah Pump' so i'll send dah 'Trey to there front' like Cafeteria Linez
Our Goals Denerios!! watch Menace n Quix make them give up music like we Stole there sterios!
So you sonned me????? Well this verse putz more 'Wholes in yah Theory' than a Bowl of Cheerios


Its Over!!! ya'll niguuhs finna fall back, yah Dig?
Last edited by Quix on Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:15 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Post by complexity »

I have a long term memory. I'll remember to respond back to this, it just might be a while.

Right now, I'm going to concentrate on the sites activity. That everyone seems to want to undermine.
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Thats a great idea ^
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Nice of you 2 Reply weeks Later. =)
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lol nigguh....I WAS WAITNING FOR A COUPLE OTHERS, but yeah, they didn't spit and will remain nameless!
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this was nice
very hot punches in there
mayne me an quix aint done yet haz we still gettin atcha lol
lets keep'em comin Quix
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mutual u where in this?
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Menace, wutz goody dog? yah know i just clappppped dem kidz!! Eazy!


MOE wutz gooody?
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Good Shit quix, i just been real buzy lately..


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thanks all!


and ALLL feed WILL be returned!
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it was good shit but it was only you im gettin confused lmao
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Moe i wasnt in this but me an quix have a diss comin and menace shud be there too
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Woah. This is awesome.

My favorite bars were the one about the butter knife and the flat line one. I think I might have heard something similar before.

I signed up just to comment on this drop. Real Nice.
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..And plex says i do nothing for the site!!! ^^

thanks Eric, Apprecate the feed, you should stick around hommie!
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