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hmmm... this one is cool. the flows are nice... of course Kurse killin that rhythm shit. This shit is smooth as hell though. It's wierd how yall kicking this shit on this beat though. I like that shit... cause it sounds like a "let's fuck baby" type of beat... some Too Short "mackin a bitch" sounding shit. great job!
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
this was fucking SICK.... the mix was off the chain... hook was fire... like the auto tune u used on the hook... it harmonized really well... everybodies verse was fire... this is some good shit i'd love to get down with a collab... this was fuckin dope tho... i'm sure lots of work was put into it... but it shows... good shit
9.5/10
peace
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself
Lawgix
Illest Radio
"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
Well It Looks Like We Have Enough Takers So....Next Collab Is Goina Be, Kurse, Tre Tru, Pfyne, And Lawgix.
I'll Have The Track Posted By Next Week Before Wednesday, Were Workin On The Hook And Concept Right Now, It's Goina Be Somthing We All Can Touch.
rap is tight....tho i dont like hook(not disrespecting) sounds kind of emo ..everything ells is good...again i think that you guys can do it much,much more better...
anyway it was good listenin
KISS MY ASS AM SERBIAN I found enlightenment at the bottom of a bottle I spoke to buddha and he told me I was tequila worm in past life
jyeah thanks for the feedback P.T.R...it is what it is.
it's one of them mellow vibe joints so, def not a club banger. one of those drink some 40's kick it at the spot with the crew type of tracks..thanks for peepin it..1