freestyle writing

[Explicit59]

Accuracy should be a legacy after death of EX
Infinite lifes, lets lay in our nest
Take a breath, hiphop is how I breathe
Slick knifes through all my dreams

Nightmares I parish, flight scared for damage
To me is most vital, why I’m lavish
Stabin the future drinkin blood that drips
Thousand vampires on doorstep for all of this

Stretch my bars yes, like I need a bigger cell
A retard guy, follow my tells
Cause what I told goes on through minds
Whats wrong?, theres somethin in my mind

50 cent light bulb, watch it shine bright
9 shots at it, I’ll still blind all eyes
Revive harry and tell him who will flash
EX, cameras broken when I move fast

[Lobes]

PRETTY COOL LYRICS, CANT FIND A FLOW FOR IT THO

[-MenaCe-]

Explicit59:


Accuracy should be a legacy after death of EX
Infinite lifes, lets lay in our nest
Take a breath, hiphop is how I breathe
Slick knifes through all my dreams
-Alittle basic not that wordy but i got what your sayin...

Nightmares I parish, flight scared for damage
To me is most vital, why I’m lavish
Stabin the future drinkin blood that drips
Thousand vampires on doorstep for all of this
-Im feelin that for ya style, Work on the flow its kinda choppy...


Stretch my bars yes, like I need a bigger cell
A retard guy, follow my tells
Cause what I told goes on through minds
Whats wrong?, theres somethin in my mind
-Did you say Retards follow you? lol Lines not that great...


50 cent light bulb, watch it shine bright
9 shots at it, I’ll still blind all eyes
Revive harry and tell him who will flash
EX, cameras broken when I move fast
-Umm...Kinda fell off man not feelin tha throw back camera lines...



overall this drop was kinda plain with no real "Oh SHIT!" lines in it and the flow was not on point but you kno what just elevate your skills and use alittle more wordplay and fix ya flow so everything just all comes together...


Keep Em Comin!!

[Explicit59]

i meant a bigger cell by brain cells,
harry is the creator of flash and he pased away already
i put flash as two definitions