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Lemonade Girls ..

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Lemonaaade Girls & Lil Boy's STAND UP!..
Hold Ya Hands Up, Stand Up
Don't Get Bullied Keep Ya Hand's Up
Whoever's Coocoo in The Mind STAND UP!..
YA STANDS UP!



See My Name's Getting Throne Around i Assume I'm King
It's In My Culture To Spot Vultures im the Only Elephant in The Room I'm in
My Plan'll Unfoil No Using Tin,i Dont Think My Arm's Go To Head Like Fusin Limbs
My Flow'Zay's Rozay i Write books Like O.j And paint pictures like monay..
Your So Gay i Don't Need ya To Feel Me
i'll Give Yall The Steel Witout Any One Keepin it Really
Your Behind a Screen That Block's ya Sun..So You Give Alot Of Tongue
But You Aint Menacing BUG BITE! Face Me? i'ma Model Get Cha Mug Right..

You niggah'z is Shemale's Want me 2 get in Detail ?
Naaah U Niggahz iz Retail..
Can't Coast No 'Whole Sail.. How Yall Gunna Prevail?
This is The End Of I-M Like Now I'm Off to E MAIL!.
Yall Famous? Star's Get Popped On a E - Scale
i Got stakes like Meatshops Yall Can't PUT UP tryna ReNail..
Sea Snail's .. Drown U SLOW FUCKAHS! Life's Gunna Fuck ya Slow
On The LOW SUCKAHS! Yall Suck On Tha Low, Some Homo Ass Rat's
The Chrome Blow Cat's Cap's Around Tha Globe N Call it PROMO AT LAST!
Atleast yall Can be Active on The Atlas Like Mohammid or Cashis
Or Even Resistence That's Passive .. Each Cat's a Actrisss..
Who's Gunna Match This? I Mean I Rolled It So The Shit Won't 'Pass Quic
i'm Burnin Slow , Turnin Foe's Into 'Hands That R Up' Like The GERMAN POSE!
I Mean Quix Is The Queen Scott Lame Be Hittin Him Mean
There's Imprint's Of Dick In His Spleen,His Gay Mark's Probably BAACK!
Everyone Even Said Preference is Like Male Cancer 'Probably Sack'
He Can Try To Mold Himself Solid But Watch The Pottery Crack..
Quix Can Dream N i'll "Snatch His Image" Like a Photography Rack!..


Lemonaaade Girls & Lil Boy's STAND UP!..
Hold Ya Hands Up, Stand Up
Don't Get Bullied Keep Ya Hand's Up
Whoever's Coocoo in The Mind STAND UP!..
YA STAND'S UP!..


I Got A Question For YOU GAY'S On Canibus Thinkin U Rockin Cool J's..
Why Yall Kicked Up a Group Page N Got 1 Persons Feed In TWO DAYS LMAO? ..
i Mean i Can Understand SOLO ACT'S!
But Yall Getting Flushed Away 'Smoothly' Like The Way LOSO RAP'S!..
I'm Grippin Heads .. No Holding Back..Spitting Led..Foldin Cats..
Like u Get Half The Points! Im The Beast The Head Class Appoints
i'm Done Smoking Weed But They Wana get Aten Like Here Have a Joint..
Who's Menace Shitting? You Aint In a VETERAN STALL..Cant Sit With us
Keep Thinkin ya Pack's Hard Till You Get Bashed By a MEDICINE BALL
Menace You RECKIN ALL? Did Ya Alter Personality 'Leave' Cause It's
Expectin Fall?.. You Say you Saw Life Using Talk Oppose To A Hamma
You Probably Get Hot With Statements When you Cold In The slamma..
Menace is "FULL" Of Talk At Home With The Tanna's..
Quixes Rhymebooks are Disposable Cameras..
He Capture's Image's not Worth Keeping.. Pictures Defined with no Meaning...
Tryna Throw Images Together He Doesn't Understand
Like a Possessed Painter..Later He's Going Under Man
Like The Definition Of Humans .. Shocking? THUNDER..BLAM!..
Quix's Known To Spit Shit Like When a PLUNGER'S SLAMMED!..
You got No Hunger Fam, Throwing Up a Click With Pure Bolemic Flow
None Of You is Sea Sick Yo..Coasting Alright But Not Like Plex..
Nothing Like Jesus Yall is The Hottest Mess Like Junk in Flames ..
Turn You Lame's Into Pumpkin Frame's Carve Ya, Starve Ya Clippaz
From The Barba Charge Ya Arma
Till i Pierce ya Chest Like Why Guard Ya Arm's Fa??
I'ma Belittle you Twat's Go Ahead Menace! Give Me The Little you Got
Stuart Small Your Pitiful Ock If i'm Athiest your a Biblical Jot ..
i'm At The Top Of The Food Chain Quix Has No VISIBLE SPOT...
He Transparent Circle's Cus He Cant Keep In Shape Like Hes in a INVISIBLE BOX
It Don't Matter If U PROTECT YA SOLDIERS My Bar's Are Like Gang Hoppin..
in Another SET YOUR OVER, Stay EXTRA SOBER Cause one Shot Could End ya
It Can Popp N Bend Ya Till Ya Name's Gone Like a Forgotten Spenda..
I Seen you Niggahz as a Automatic Snack Like Spotting Vendas.. ..
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Re: Lemonade Girls ..

Post by Quix »

YOUR JOKING ... RIGHT?


There's Imprint's Of Dick In His Spleen,His Gay Mark's Probably BAACK!
Everyone Even Said Preference is Like Male Cancer 'Probably Sack'
He Can Try To Mold Himself Solid But Watch The Pottery Crack..
Quix Can Dream N i'll "Snatch His Image" Like a Photography Rack!..


I think you dissed yourself there, that was a horrible bar! What does that mean? lol ... Very very Weakk HAz, thought you would have come at least a little nice!!


overall - I'm dissapointed!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Re: Lemonade Girls ..

Post by TreTru »

i thought the flo on this one was actually good in most spots..an easier read then most ya scripts.... The Hook Rythm was difficult fo me to get though..



There's Imprint's Of Dick In His Spleen,His Gay Mark's Probably BAACK!
Everyone Even Said Preference is Like Male Cancer 'Probably Sack'
He Can Try To Mold Himself Solid But Watch The Pottery Crack..
Quix Can Dream N i'll "Snatch His Image" Like a Photography Rack!..
^^^
as for this..i guess shyt went over niggas heads..lmao
i understood it but the wording on the first line left it a lil iffy...

maybe if ya said like
There's Imprint's Of Dick In His Spleen,His Gay Mark's Probably BAACK!
Everyone Say's his Preferences is Like Male Cancer, cuz his are 'Probably Sack'
or sumthin like that anyway...a good read..1
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