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The Evil One

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Slept on... like this sites for narc-o-leptic's
I got nothing to Hide... Like a Flasher in the park Arested..
Yea my stlyes Dark n hectic... mabey be part dyslexic.
i just Killed one blunt about to spark the next Its...
time to Get Fadded n just start to Wreck this
ill Eat ya Hearts for breakfast...
This is the only ART were ya Smarts get tested
My flows Sharp infectious... n Shark infested..

i got a spittin heat addiction.... the key is mixin Speach & Friction ...
id Rather sit in this stinkin kitchin Drinkin bleach n twitchin ...
than listen to some preachin Christians ... We all know they Teach Inscriptions ..diction..full of Freakin ficiton...
Priests in the paper cuz of weak convictions... we laugh at the mug shots n sweet discriptions..
The bibles out dated.. im talkin each addition...
if i wanted to live in the past i would just speak egyption...


u can tell when ur Surrounded by snakes ... there Skin is so soft when its shed...
Insomniac that will sleep when i die... That coffin is bed...
Smokin pot till this shit im Coffin is red...
id approach Joey with caution instead....not sure if u know hes a lil lost in his head...
Some of these cats should stop talkin... never be hot no matter how often its said..
i grab the mic... Spitin about how im Awsome in bed....
tellin this gurl i like it when she plays Possum & dead
Bitch! NOW! That wasn't an option i said!

we all wanna be Rich.. Handsome .... Live n a Sick.. Mansion ...
Drive a whip thats got the chicks pantin...
Damn it Joey Quit Rantin...
ur On Video Chat .. n got this bitch Dancin...
showed up to fuck... & met Chris Hanson

All the Hoes scream.. There goes joes cammarow
Exposin ur bones to marrow... out the window With Bows n arrows...
That cats Hungry and all he sees is crows n sparrow..
No ur flows wont compare yo... But dont dispare tho
my shits only composed to scare foe

Fuck battlin... Ill just stare at ya hoes.. Flauntin
And Not care that ya so Want it..
Evil? This Joe Character's Flows Haunted....
fuck An IDOL... I wanna be amaericas most Wanted
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Re: The Evil One

Post by The Gonz »

Bout time your ass makes an appearance! This shit was pretty nice man. The flow was off in a couple places, but it had some nice rhyme schemes and that strange sense of humor you have lol. Shit was nice man, now just stay active!
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this shit is pretty nice man the flow is real nice in some spots i mean you improve some things but overall its good i can deffinitely see potential, keep droppin bro
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