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Lonely Life 2005-2006

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I wrote this about a year ago. Sometimes its hard to get
back into the state you were in at the time. Yet I think I did it successfully.

stare at the moon, as it sparkles n shines....
look back at my life, what does it define...
this journey of life, walked into blind...
now i leave it, with nothing behind...

i could easily cry, but i'll take a drink...
the pain in my heart is very deep...
the silence screams, as i think...
not much longer, an i can sleep..

never followed foot prints...
barely walked in my own...
couldn't take hints...
n always got stoned...
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now Im convinced...
that Im not alone..
a lots changed since..
i wrote this poem..

i really have grown..
everything has changed..
the meddows have snow..
the roads are two lanes..

i took a bite of the apple..
jumped through flames..
I actually won a few battles..
yet they still step on my game..

so i really am baffled...
how i still stand here...
my problems been tackled..
yet I still see them clear...

history is out to get me...
the future wants me dead..
right now I will just be...
the man with to much led..

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Really Deep.....You got much talent.......Like you said about emotions.....This is very deep.....I understand it......I like the way you ryhmed it......and yet nobody will every understand the poem as much as u can....nobody will ever be able to fill in your foot prints because nothin' is ever the same.....keep on changing for the best...and never for the worst.....1
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thanks for the feedback, its are jobs as writers to make the audience understand as best as we can.
which makes a great writer, 1
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no doubt...this piece was heart felt 4 real
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