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You bring the 'hearses guns and judges', I got the 'verses puns and punches'...

Skull and the cross flows...E's calm like the opponent you lost too
I'll bury his philosophy underground, all you will find is the bones of apostoles
subliminal shots are shots too, this fag is a fake, he is not in my zone
how can this queer give me jazz without stockon malone?
I'm better off dropping alone, kids know, my bars, and how I can spit this amount
his flow is limited, he has the never ending twitter account
he's bitter about, shit that happened years ago, you're lame for this
you never did find your way like an insane tourist in a rain forest
I'm the games purist, aquafina, you think that you're clever rapping
we have the same style, the Rocafella's matching, I just do it in better fashion
what ever happens, I'll stand tall, a rematch is in the works..fine
I'm still wondering how you survived the first time, you had by far the worst rhyme
this nerds mine, he is a helpless boxer, a selfish rocker
now you're so over the hill, you're going to need to get rescued by a helicopter
hella proper, I take your life with this, thats the price you give
I been doing this since you were a kid, no shots, just telling it like it is
punches to the gut, time to ice your ribs, I'd be amiss to say
that you missed your hay, you wish today your whole career would ricochet
I rip this gay, battling me is something I told you not to do
you might be on top of your game, while the rest of the game is top of you
if you think this drop is true, you should go cash in all your chips in vegas
you're so far from what you used to be, I found ur text drops on craigs list
what this begs is, a second look at his misplaced rhymes goin thru the greatvine
you should take mine, the only way that you're getting facetime is on dateline
I break minds, you're dumb to try to battle me, you're undersized
lightening in the bottle, I just waited until your thunder died
fuck your redundant lines, I've seen everything that you done with rhymes
u wonder why, ur career can be summarized as a guy who quit one hundred times
had couple lucky hits like bumper rides, nobody gives a shit, ur not on top fives
when we lock eyes, you will know your destiny, like Nas, try to not cry
If you stop, you got wise, its idiotic that you might decide to step to me
I am a different type of complexity, you're fine as a friend, I just don't like you professionally
only fight for necessity, you have spite that runs through your blood like its an std
see it right when you message me, you want to get hype from the best emcee
I strike intellectually, your life is wreck waiting to happen, you should get an SUV
we know your conceptions don't work, you have twice the vasectomy
I'm your role model, precise with my legacy, you don't want to spit this
everything you try to accomplish is fucked up by complexity like quantum physics
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This Was ill as Fuck, All The Rhyming Words in The Right Places Gave it a Smooth Flow Throughout. i Like ur Style Of Punches, Some Can Be Pretty Tongue-in-Cheek But in a Good Way, And u Kept To The Topic The Whole Way Through. i Was Feeling The Symbolism Too (The Rockafella Line, The Nas Line, And The 1st Line). There Are Loads Of Bars i Could Quote That Stood Out To Me, But it Would Be Most Of The Drop.
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Uppin. This is a diss to a prominent member of the sight.
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complexity wrote:You bring the 'hearses guns and judges', I got 'verses punches and punches'...

Skull and the cross flows...E's calm like the opponent you lost too
I'll bury his philosophy underground, all you will find is the bones of apostoles

first bar really didn't rhyme but it was cool

subliminal shots are shots too, this fag is a fake, he is not in my zone
how can this queer give me jazz without stockon malone?

haha

I'm better off dropping alone, kids know, my bars, and how I can spit this amount
his flow is limited, he has the never ending twitter account

ouch... slick line

he's bitter about, shit that happened years ago, you're lame for this
you never did find your way like an insane tourist in a rain forest

lol thats funny

I'm the games purist, aquafina, you think that you're clever rapping
we have the same style, the Rocafella's matching, I just do it in better fashion

"i'm the games purist aquafina" "rocafella's matching i just do it in better fashion" doooooope

what ever happens, I'll stand tall, a rematch is in the works..fine
I'm still wondering how you survived the first time, you had by far the worst rhyme

i'd like to know who ur takin a stab at cause ur killin him so far

this nerds mine, he is a helpless boxer, a selfish rocker
now you're so over the hill, you're going to need to get rescued by a helicopter

i feel like Nelson from The Simpsons i should point n go "Haw Haw"

hella proper, I take your life with this, thats the price you give
I been doing this since you were a kid, no shots, just telling it like it is

no doubt

punches to the gut, time to ice your ribs, I'd be amiss to say
that you missed your hay, you wish today your whole career would ricochet


I rip this gay, battling me is something I told you not to do
you might be on top of your game, while the rest of the game is top of you

OUCH!!!!

if you think this drop is true, you should go cash in all your chips in vegas
you're so far from what you used to be, I found ur text drops on craigs list

thats the best fuckin line in the whole verse without a doubt brilliant

what this begs is, a second look at his misplaced rhymes goin thru the greatvine
you should take mine, the only way that you're getting facetime is on dateline

lmfao

I break minds, you're dumb to try to battle me, you're undersized
lightening in the bottle, I just waited until your thunder died
fuck your redundant lines, I've seen everything that you done with rhymes


u wonder why, ur career can be summarized as a guy who quit one hundred times
had couple lucky hits like bumper rides, nobody gives a shit, ur not on top fives

when we lock eyes, you will know your destiny, like Nas, try to not cry
If you stop, you got wise, its idiotic that you might decide to step to me

like how it all ran together sick shit man

I am a different type of complexity, you're fine as a friend, I just don't like you professionally
only fight for necessity, you have spite that runs through your blood like its an std


see it right when you message me, you want to get hype from the best emcee
I strike intellectually, your life is wreck waiting to happen, you should get an SUV

nice

we know your conceptions don't work, you have twice the vasectomy
I'm your role model, precise with my legacy, you don't want to spit this
everything you try to accomplish is fucked up by complexity like quantum physics

dope
over all i'd really like to know who that was against cause if i were them i wouldn't show my face around here anymore... i love your style too... it just goes together really well... good shit man...
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the last syllable didn't right, correct....

Thanks for the feedback! And the person I was dissing will become evident soon, I guarantee that he will show his face around here again, lol.
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lets hope so the suspense is killing me!!!! GOD I LOVE BEEF!!!
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subliminal shots are shots too, this fag is a fake, he is not in my zone
how can this queer give me jazz without stockon malone?

Tough ..


I'm better off dropping alone, kids know, my bars, and how I can spit this amount
his flow is limited, he has the never ending twitter account
he's bitter about, shit that happened years ago, you're lame for this
you never did find your way like an insane tourist in a rain forest

LMAO!! .. That Was just Stringed 2Gether Beautifully Dood ..



I'm the games purist, aquafina, you think that you're clever rapping
we have the same style, the Rocafella's matching, I just do it in better fashion << Raw ..


what ever happens, I'll stand tall, a rematch is in the works..fine
I'm still wondering how you survived the first time, you had by far the worst rhyme
this nerds mine, he is a helpless boxer, a selfish rocker
now you're so over the hill, you're going to need to get rescued by a helicopter


Word .. Put Together Nicely .. Potent Bar..
hella proper, I take your life with this, thats the price you give
I been doing this since you were a kid, no shots, just telling it like it is
punches to the gut, time to ice your ribs, I'd be amiss to say
that you missed your hay, you wish today your whole career would ricochet
I rip this gay, battling me is something I told you not to do
you might be on top of your game, while the rest of the game is top of you

LOL!..

if you think this drop is true, you should go cash in all your chips in vegas
you're so far from what you used to be, I found ur text drops on craigs list


Not Feeling The Craig's List Thing ..



what this begs is, a second look at his misplaced rhymes goin thru the greatvine
you should take mine, the only way that you're getting facetime is on dateline
I break minds, you're dumb to try to battle me, you're undersized
lightening in the bottle, I just waited until your thunder died
fuck your redundant lines, I've seen everything that you done with rhymes
u wonder why, ur career can be summarized as a guy who quit one hundred times

Lmao!! .. That Was Tough .. Nice Hay's , Multis .. Subliminals.. just Came Thru Nice.. Thunder Shit Was Cool 2 ..

had couple lucky hits like bumper rides, nobody gives a shit, ur not on top fives

Lol


when we lock eyes, you will know your destiny, like Nas, try to not cry
If you stop, you got wise, its idiotic that you might decide to step to me
I am a different type of complexity, you're fine as a friend, I just don't like you professionally

Lmao Funny ..

only fight for necessity, you have spite that runs through your blood like its an std
see it right when you message me, you want to get hype from the best emcee
I strike intellectually, your life is wreck waiting to happen, you should get an SUV

.. Rawness...





we know your conceptions don't work, you have twice the vasectomy
I'm your role model, precise with my legacy, you don't want to spit this
everything you try to accomplish is fucked up by complexity like quantum physics

Tough Ending ....


& This Was Deff a Hot Ass Drop ..
Wordplay, Punches , Multis, Scheme's .. Subliminals.. Were All Good..

Keep it goin ..
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WOW...fuckin ill str8 up...

I see what law meant about the intro but it didn't bother me none..


The whole drop was hott....

I'm still wondering how you survived the first time, you had by far the worst rhyme
this nerds mine, he is a helpless boxer, a selfish rocker
now you're so over the hill, you're going to need to get rescued by a helicopter
hella proper, I take your life with this, thats the price you give
I been doing this since you were a kid, no shots, just telling it like it is
punches to the gut, time to ice your ribs, I'd be amiss to say
that you missed your hay, you wish today your whole career would ricochet
^^^^
that was my favorite part 4 sure..

the Rhyme scheme is crazy and ya flow is sik ...Nice to see you droppin again...1
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Post by P.T.R-ins »

subliminal shots are shots too, this fag is a fake, he is not in my zone
how can this queer give me jazz without stockon malone?

didnt get this 1?who is stockon malone??




I'm still wondering how you survived the first time, you had by far the worst rhyme

this is killing rhyme just i dont know about what rhymes you speak..it would have much bigger effect if peps would know to who is this address



I been doing this since you were a kid, no shots, just telling it like it is
punches to the gut, time to ice your ribs, I'd be amiss to say
that you missed your hay, you wish today your whole career would ricochet
I rip this gay, battling me is something I told you not to do
you might be on top of your game, while the rest of the game is top of you

this is cool..like you killing that guy b4 battle


when we lock eyes, you will know your destiny, like Nas, try to not cry
If you stop, you got wise, its idiotic that you might decide to step to me
I am a different type of complexity, you're fine as a friend, I just don't like you professionally

this part was cine a touchy...lol...

anyway whole thing is dope...tnx
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a few ppl broke it down like i was gonna. bout time ur ass started droppin again! what more can i say?

dope

loved the flow,never fell off once. i believe u said u arent ever gonna do audio or somewhere along those lines,but u shud really think about it.
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pretty sure i know who this is about
nice drop bro youve elevated alot
ive been busy as hell lately
is why i haven't been around
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