fuck the scripts(its about freestyle)

[P.T.R-ins]

fuck the scripts/i share them like tips/with free-cutting-style/ for does who ride dicks/dont fly with the sticks/i guaranty youll fall wit fat lips/i dont need beats,mic or other shits/ to flip n fry n opponent like chips/whats with this?/dont know are you ready to know /Insanes hook blows/that put mc-s in bed like hoes/with old pair of shoes /am kicking your best/i got not much to lose/so put me on test/i wont say that am best/just will rip your ass/n leave you in pain/like cuted wit glass/trespasssssss/i know that am not/so any *G* try to play me/ ^ill put him on *SPOT*/hope you not/step on my route/coz youl be left bleedin/without cut on your trout/........lol...

-- Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:21 pm --

beng

[-MenaCe-]

You Suck!

Fix ya structure...

[Meta]

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Get off the site.

[complexity]

You're better than lots of dudes on youtube. Fix your structure and don't listen to these jerks.

Attempt to read a lot of scriptures, see what these people do, and try to duplicate it.

End of story.

[Haz]

Well.. Dont Try To Duplicate it.. Because One of The Most Important Things About Being a Writer is your Orginality & Creativity.. Take a Look At People's Drops.. Even Mainstream Or Underground Artist's Lyrics.. Get a Feel For Structure.. Understand Punchlines, Metaphors, Wordplay.. Multis.. & You Should Get On The Right Track.

[complexity]

Yes. Duplicating in the beginning is ok though, you will find yourself through that process.

Originality is an almost impossible thing to accomplish when you're a new writer.

[P.T.R-ins]

tanx for advice (bad n good) tho lol

[complexity]

You need thick skin to elevate man. Keep at it. Stay on this site, it will help a lot.

[P.T.R-ins]

dont wory lol my skin is fat like pounded chees

-- Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:47 am --

any way am havin fun

[Petrafyne]

Garbage...Just Give Up

[P.T.R-ins]

words like a blade-cut that filtred cunt/splite em like a splif-smoke em like a blunt/P.T.R remain after war stomp-insane hellhound n they r meat to hunt/its not way you look-its way you act/spit swords to play-hits for respect/reject your rulles-you fools/new n old schools-disappear like on day light ghoul/you kids should play -seak n hide/take your bitch out-its dick n ride/...bla,bla,bla this should be enough for now