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~Symbolikull~
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my til death

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jus somethin i did this mornin!!!
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Re: my til death

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The intro was a bit much for me and all i was likin the fast flow you were doing.. kinda wanted more of that. feel off here and there but not really bad. Hook kinda sounded like a verse. but the lyrics were tight. over all it was tight.
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Re: my til death

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the intro was kinda corny lol...but overall it's a different sound that's what's sup the exactly what the game needs right now something new to bring tot he table...you down for the collab though? i finally got my new mic so my quality will be significantly better. let me know something
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thanx for the feed.... and at any time im down for a collab jus send me and idea!
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Re: my til death

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For Me I Liked The Intro, This Was A Hot Track, Reminded Me Of Something I Would Listen To Back In The Days, Lyrics An Rhyme Scheme Was On Point, The Only Thing Is Too Bad This Wasn't A Better Production, Then This Would Be 100% Tighter, Keep Dropin Homie.
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Re: my til death

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thanx for all the feed fellas!

yeah imo i liked the intro too lol.... and as the production is concerned, i jus gotta new mic but my pc wont let me control the recordin volume on it so i get one volume level (on or off lol) and im no genius wit cool edit pro, so i do what i can do wit it until it sounds good to me. sooner or later ill figure it out
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