insTRUmental -vs- MenaCe part 2 (MenaCe 3-0)

[insTRUmental]

anything goes..

come git what you beggin fo' mama

-- Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:08 pm --

i'm the words in the sky, like cannibus smoke
a unanimous vote i could slander his quote, slice his neck and hand him his throat/
i spit the best, pass my book and i'm a instant threat
i speak to life forms, that ain't even in existence yet/
u can post ya wack ass prewritten rhyme, still kill his spirit,
u could own this site and have ya alias' vote, still KO ya Illest Lyrics/
the phraseologist, bring this bastard to me
one verse takes you from illiteracy, to a master's degree/
when i first out, pull your hearse out,
if you bite i'll punch a hole in your stomach, reach in and pull my verse out/
go to war with ya, a thousand horses couldn't drag me off of ya
too raw fa ya, that's why you on my wood just like carpenter/
mollywhop ya, stop ya, paralyze ya from tha chin up,
torure this so-called menace, shave ya head and then braid ya skin up/
i'm part sionide, i'm part venom
i got jars in my kitchen cabinet that look empty, but it's really your thoughts in em/
i'll git'you where emcee M.D.'s cant fix you,
im a tough act ta follow, you a tough act ta sit thru/
this bitch so scared she'll probly faint before i hit'em,
persecutors suffer the verses impact before i spit 'em/
you want to kill me huh, that's cool i know its true,
but when you do i'm coming back as a bullet to murder you...

-- Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:08 pm --

lol, everywhere i been, you been right behind me..yappin..

now all of a sudden you need time ta think about it?

gettin ya game up...i feel u

-- Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:28 am --

bzzzzt

[-MenaCe-]

Listen!!


Get it right bitch you cant slice shit recite or drop Precise Hits..
With ah Tight Grip i can snap this "TOOL" in two like some Vice Grips!!..

Wit Thumbs Up while this Dumb Fuck still Lackin Barz that are Hard Hittin..
Failed to Manage in our Business his lines are dull inside his skull a Maggot could Starve In It!!..

Just Witness in an instint this little Bitch Frail Princess..
Get Addicted to my "lines" on some Fish Scale Sick Shit!!..

And obviously you cant rock wit me i make all ya Synonyms Fold..
All hidden Exposed weak wit music just keep it movin like ya Spinnaz and Vogues!!..

More then an Imposter Sorta wit his "doctors Orders" showin Low Relevance..
"Down South" is where ya careers headin since i gave ya a dose of ya Own Medicine!!..

Gettin Torn Apart my lyrical scalpel choppin forgotten garbage Off Ya Heart..
This BITCH dont have a deal cause his BATTLEFIELD resembles Jordan Sparks!!..Pussy!

So simple to leave em crippled Broken in Half might as well throw ya Hopes in Tha Trash..
And puff Haze cause this instrumental couldn't "Just Blaze" even if i Soaked Em in Gas!!

Wit no Balls he should change his name to Vasectomy sayin i aint shit but he's Less Then Me..
Make this apprentice see He's just a "Bunny" in this field i hear the same deal when Kendra Speaks!!..

Far from hot all his Raps are Frozen who the fuck ever said this Cat Was Potent..
Imma Detatch this Rodent and while his tracks are floatin..I hold tha shit you Patch tha Boat Wit!!..Motherfucka!


So sinkin is what your thinkin Of wanna fight you better bring a buzz thats Gigantic..
I'll make this Guy Vanish and kill numbness you'll see him still plumit like the Titanic!!

Just give in motherfucka its a slim chance in this dance that You Survive..
Tryin to push tha truth aside that you just got HUNG UP yea bitch Crusified!!

[K KiLLaH]

sickbattle ill vote when i get back from the clubs tonight

[~Symbolikull~]

flow- instr
punches- menace
personals- instr
multies- menace
wordplay/nameplay- menace

vote: menace by a marginal victory

[-MenaCe-]

1-0 Uppin!

[MOEstradamus]

i agree wit ghost on this one
flow-instrumental
punches- menace
personals- instrumental
multies- menace
wordplay/nameplay-menace

vote menace

[LunGzZ]

First battle I'm just gunna do categories instead of a gigantic breakdown since theres no agreed on shit.


BREAKDOWN:

Punches-5
Personals-5
Nameplay-4
Wordplay-4
Creativity-3
Flow-3
Multies-3
Opener-1
Closer-1



PUNCHES: Gotta give the punch category to Menace, came hard with them punchlines, kinda died down in the end, but started hard. TRU seemed like he had a more audio oriented battle verse...

PERSONALS: Not much here, but I'll have to give it to TRU. Though his personals were kinda played as they've been used on Menace before, he still tried to put his own spin on it.

NAMEPLAY: No one took this category enough for me to even rule it a tie...They both left themselves open to get hit by nameplay shots and not have any to spit back, but luckily enough for both, neither took advantage of that.

WORDPLAY: Again, no one took this category for me...Someone could of really benefited by using some to separate them from their opponent.

CREATIVITY: Going to give this one to TRU. He had some witty plays I had never heard before that impressed me.

FLOW: No one stumped me with flow on this one, so I'll rule it a draw. Menace showed better flow when he actually flowed and TRU was just all over the place, being a little more consistent, but still not having anything amazing.

MULTIES: Basically Menace used multies...That's why he wins this one.

OPENER: Menace. Menace won it simply because it was way more witty, as his verse started strong and then slowly lowered in quality. TRU needed time to start up, hit his stride, but then fall off it repeatedly.

CLOSER: I'll give this one a draw as well. I wasn't feeling Menace's AT ALL, but TRU's was nothing special too. He actually said Menace could kill him technically.


TOTAL:::

MENACE-13
TRU-12






VoTe::: Honestly I feel the categories made this battle seem closer then it felt. TRU had some witty lines that I was really feeling, but I had to wade through a lot of meh shit to get to it. Menace had some illy lines too, but he fell off HARD after his first like 4 or 5 bars. Basically if TRU came with more of a text oriented style I think he would of standed a better chance. My vote goes to Men.

[MOEstradamus]

3-0

[-MenaCe-]

KnockOut!

Close This Shit!..

[insTRUmental]

lol..like ya own crew gon vote against u..
3 votes an out...let'em all vote

tsss, you got it

pccce

[K KiLLaH]

3-0 KO -Closed n Updated-