wats wrong in my head

[MOEstradamus]

it started in a cypher but i had to continue dis story....

i got more issues then the posts n dis thread, dats an understatment of wat goes on in my head...
i wanna flatline, while im layn n bed, and cook a cat up so my stomach is fed//

im fucked in da head, like i got a dick in my ear, man im something to fear...
ive planned out 30 murders you wana listen or hear, i gotem writtin out, about my closest of pears//

da dearest of dears, man i have no reason to care, i snatch peoples animals and strip dem of hair...
i know im unfair, im killin for fun no need for a dare, you know who ima stomp by the way dat i stair//

u wana hear a scare, wen someone dies it gets me hard, i cant come back in the world, im way to far...
i wana have a disease sumtin like sars, so i can spit it on da world like im spittin dese bars//

my lungs full of tar, from the cigerattes now, i wana murder a birthday party while dressed as a clown...
i wana be like da zodiac killa and terrorize towns, i wana be da santa dat puts da kids in da ground//*

my face covered in frowns, man how can dis be, how can anybody have as many problems like me...
cuz man killin people used to give me wet dreams, i even ate da dude so deres no murder scene//

u should be grateful to see, how my life stands, i would love to take a hatchet to ya head man...
i know no matter wat i say you wont understand, so if my knife dont kill ya den my machete can//

u got it fam, im crazier den scotch we aint on da same level, cuz if an animal cums in front of me i step on da pedal...
ill put a star on da bullet so wen i blast you its like you gettn a medal, a creation of god i think i was sent by da devil//

my head aint quite level, so i keep my mouth shut, so you don't wana stunt....
man i hate dat word its a played little fuck, anyway... step out to me and ill speed up my truck//

now dey tryin to duck, so if you ever hear on da news, a man got shot wit his dudes...
or when you hear of a woman who was killed in a fuid, think of me and give me my dues//

*for da uk people da zodiac killa was a killer who killed 7 ppl that tied to him but he called da police and said it was 37 he was never caught and he had everyone fearn the night, and da santa in da ground last xmas a guy dressed like santa killed like 3 kids and 4 adults at a xmas party den killed himself


This isnt a diss to scotch he just wrote a verse sayin how crazy he is about animals.... so i was just stating im crazier in my head

[$harky]

lol good shyt, fo real, and if I was you I'd also explain why i'm droppin big names man...
Anyway flowed well, had some literally sick punches, but fukn funny ones so yeah dat all I got to say.

peace out NyaggaH

[eMCee Havic]

lol what is wrong with your head!!! pretty sic man, alot of your "Syllables" didnt match up. but it didnt effect the piece.. you got a dark mind, on that brother lynch tip. Barrs i felt were pretty stretched. but if you make each line a barr. than it works.. good drop man keep um comin

[MOEstradamus]

yea i knew the multis wouldn't match i wasnt tryin for dem lol i guess i should stop judgein on dem outside of battles. lol and i stretched them out but i agree i coulda changed each line to bars demself ill keep a thought on it. thank you both for the feed.. and yes i got much more in dis head of mine youve only seen a demo of wat i think of lmao

[TreTru]

pretty cool drop.. irt aint a battle, but as an audio cat
i'm into multi's big time..this piece didn't have too many
but your rhyme scheme kept it poppin..some decent punches in it actually..cool
i agree about that brother lynch comment too..keep doin ya thing..homey...1

[$harky]

Aight MOE I catch your drift niggah...hope yo catch mine...

peace.

[HKX]

rhyme scheme was dope as well as the punchlines u had sum nice one's in there

this line right here stood out 2 me da most tho

my lungs full of tar, from the cigerattes now, i wana murder a birthday party while dressed as a clown...
i wana be like da zodiac killa and terrorize towns, i wana be da santa dat puts da kids in da ground//*


shit was nutz nigga i was like wtf haha like how u added da shit in there

keep droppin homie

[MOEstradamus]

thanks for the feed

[insTRUmental]

rhyme scheme was tight and on point..
you are a lil twisted homie, but
fukk it...thas a good thing...

pccce

[Brah-Vo]

damn whatever is wrong in ya head its makin you do something righjt.
This was dope to me. Flow isnt important to me, but either way u didnt fall that off.
One of my fave pieces that ive read recently. good job bro

[~Symbolikull~]

this shit was nice man, twisted lol some lines were forced or stretched, a few could be re-worded a lil diff jus to make it clearer. flow was nice.. if u were tryin for multies ur syllables were off. but the content made up for it. dope piece man


u got it fam, im crazier den scotch we aint on da same level, cuz if an animal cums in front of me i step on da pedal...
ill put a star on da bullet so wen i blast you its like you gettn a medal, a creation of god i think i was sent by da devil//

[-MenaCe-]

Good Shit Moe!