I'll Murder You

[Phasewon]

This is a lil' verse from a collab,
Feed is appreciated & returned...

[Phasewon]
I'll murder you faggots, burn you with matches, and cans
Of flammable gases, then throw you in the furnace and turn you to ashes!
I'll serve you for practice, on every verse I'm a savage
Hurdle the planet backwards, and turn the earth off it's axis
Preserve you in plastic, I have a thirst for the madness
I'll burst out my casket, jack the hearse and swerve it in traffic
I'm the serpent of rappin', that mastered murderous tactics
And just converted to catholic, to put a curse on the baptist
Worship satanic idols, and just reworded a passage
In the bible, to get the mass and service in churches to chant it
I'm the most disturbin' version of Manson
That'll grab the burner and blast it to have you doing vertical backflips
Til you're in the hospital, with your sternum collapsin'
On top your abdominals, causin' internal contractions
The nurses'll panic, have a nervous reaction
Call for surgical status, hit a nerve and cause permanent damage
I'm holding thirty virgins for ransom, and one gets raped
Every hour, if I don't get the powder and sherm I demanded
Perversion's my passion; so I'm rammin' a person
Head first up your ass 'n jam it, for fuckin' with the verbal assassin

[MOEstradamus]

ok man ur flow was a lil choppy in spots and near the end but overall decent drop wat was the topic to this collab???

I'm the serpent of rappin', that mastered murderous tactics
And just converted to catholic, to put a curse on the baptist
Worship satanic idols, and just reworded a passage

^^^my favorite lines of ur verse

[insTRUmental]

i liked it a lot..
gotta read it close and see the rhyme scheme is tighly knit thru the whole verse..

flow was on point...very good read..

ay, you replied to my ("go see the docterrrr") thread..
u left positive feed but said the rhyme was..in other words, a lil subpar...

cooo, i was playin wit him...it was more about the story..

check out a couple battles i got goin (no response yet)

im not askin you to vote...(no need to even reply)

just see that im SO muthafukkin serious..

preciate


pccce

[eMCee Havic]

yea another sick piece bout to phase another one

you got some astic fantastics, yeah i liked the flow hella easy to follow and some sick lines that jump out the casket swerving the hearse in traffic line was dope man.. piece

[Brah-Vo]

HOT DAMN !!!!!!!!!
THIS WAS ILL
Flow was crazy cant believe you thought of so many rhymes with one scheme !
Dope as hell . Phase you keep dropping heat man.
Get battling!

[Darth Vader]

yo what i like about this one is the wordplay and use of multis, no doubt. just couldnt figure out what tempo you were spitting this to, I tried it and it seemed like u needed to edit it in some parts but again the wordplay was fantastic. my fav. lines --->>>

I'm the serpent of rappin', that mastered murderous tactics
And just converted to catholic, to put a curse on the baptist

That's sick right there homie...you seem to get better and better as time passes, so keep with the feeds...good look for you here. 1~

[Momeijah]

Yeah That Was Sweet How u Kept The Same Scheme and Structure. Kinda Reminds Me Of Eminem Structure Wise at Some Parts And How u Would Go Off On a Tangent at Random. Multis Were Ace, imagery Was Sweet at Parts Too, ill Shit Keep it Up.

[- Mutual -]

^ i thought that
it deffo had a eminem type style to it
very dope multies the punches was hot
very skilled writtens fire mayne
keep'em comin

[Phasewon]

much respect for the feed, yall.
I kind of only sign into this bitch
lazily to thank yall for the feed,
don't really have time to seek out
each individual's piece to leave feed,
if you leave a link up to your joint
I'll be sure to return the feedback...

and props to R.A.I... been consistently showing
me love since day one, it's just net shit,
but thanks anyway homie, your input is mad appreciated.

-- Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:55 am --

i liked it a lot..
gotta read it close and see the rhyme scheme is tighly knit thru the whole verse..

flow was on point...very good read..

ay, you replied to my ("go see the docterrrr") thread..
u left positive feed but said the rhyme was..in other words, a lil subpar...

cooo, i was playin wit him...it was more about the story..

check out a couple battles i got goin (no response yet)

im not askin you to vote...(no need to even reply)

just see that im SO muthafukkin serious..

preciate


pccce

and no doubt mental, I've already seen some of your
previous work, I know your shit is on point, that diss
joint was definitely ill based on the creative aspect,
I was speaking more so in terms of face to face battles,
but I know where you was coming from with it, shit was dope.

[-MenaCe-]

Entire drop is nice...

[BennyBones]

sick... need i say more?