LungzZ -v.s- Modern Defiance (LunGzZ 3-0)

[eMCee Havic]

6 barrs
due 4 days after both check in

house cats.


no
.bitin
.recyclin

alrigt this is my check

[LunGzZ]

cheKk

[eMCee Havic]

Lungz

I’ll make Lungz lunge miss and plunge like grappling-on-a-cliffs-edge
Lungzz is like a condom cause he’s only unraveling-on-a-dicks-head

his lungs have asthma so he’ll never see combat or be-a-veteran
plus ya tongue must be numb cause “Lung(zZ)” is a speech-impediment (ZZZzzz)..damn

So ugly the only dimes you dropping is calls joking-wit-investigators
like a black out in a hospital I’ll have lungzZ choking-wit-respirators

we already know lungzZ aint gangster so don’t bother-with-the-thug-text
an your families already ashamed of you your father-wants-a-blood-test

you aint dope LungZz only gets progressively worse like emphysema
your punches fall short and too late like the man who invented-fema (F.E.M.A)

I’ll puncture lungzZ Cause “Lawgix” already snatched-his-breath
Crush ya ribs through ya cause “Hazard” beat an smashed-ya-chest (hazard won 3-0)

[LunGzZ]

I think I'll have time to drop tomorrow, I'm doing my Arv verse soon.

-- Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:58 pm --

Modern Defiance


Gotta flow so tall that Osama would jet it, Strike with your fists and I’m katana protected!
My flows so hot caz it’s lava injected! Only time you see Mod earn/Modern victories when Obama’s elected!

I got speed like a sonic track or greater, Straight drink out a tonic tap with chaser
This fag likes lockets, bags and sailors; So he’s a personal abuser, like chronic masturbators! OhHh

Ay Mod, No one is stopping me hater! I’m killin you with word’s like talking is danger!
And You ain’t robbing me faker! Caz He couldn’t stand a chance, like bankrupt monopoly players!!!

Call me the army how I’m fearing gays! I got a leering gaze that’ll spear your face!
LunGzZ steer with haste! When punches land, Def will be hooked up to machines like hearing aids!

This nigga gets served when my shoes stamp, He’s sad and sappy like a blues band;
Go for a punch and I shoot hands, LunGzZ got Defiance out of the question like a boot camp!!!!

The way I zoom I should be a photo…Me and sick go together like Z and Zoro
For votes he pleads it thorough caz this fag throws more links at us then Shigeru Miyamoto*!!! WtFF!!


*-Shigeru Miyamoto made the Legend of Zelda games...Main character is Link.

-- Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:06 pm --

Uppping

[MOEstradamus]

cats

opener-Lungzz the obama shit was funny
flow-modern
punches-lungzz this one was hard for a min.. but lungzz had some harder hitting ones
multis-moderns lined up more but close cat
word/nameplay-tie
entertainment-lungzz had some funny ass shit
closer-lungzz closer was killin it modern urs was dope to but dam lungzz got crazy

lungzz-5
modern-4

Modern u surprised me with ur drop... it was fire multis on point flowed good and you kept the cats close in my opinion but man lungzz just brought a whole nother level to it... the cats look close but if i did a bar 4 bar break down he woulda got you by atleast ten but still great drop u woulda won the 5 battles u lost if u woulda dropped sumtin like this all those times good battle

vote-lungzz

[eMCee Havic]

1-0 uppin

[LunGzZ]

Thanks for the vote MOE. Nice battle Mod, upp

[Tellavision]

opener...Lungz, wasn't really feeling Modern's opener
flow....modern by far
punches...lungzz solid and more consistant
multis....modern, easier to read and better structured.
word/nameplay... ima argue a tie on this one...equally the obama and speech impediment lines was on levels which were equally witty. so noone wins this cat
entertainment...lungz, consistant through the verse, Modern came with it too but your opener kinda faulted you in this cat.
closer....Lungzz, as stretched as it was i have to give him that w in this cat


final vote goes to Lungz


Modern you had a nice verse overall, obviously better structured, easier to read and flow alot better than Lungz did.
you had some fairly strong punches however i didn't feel as if you verse was consistant enough to earn you the W in the match up. I'll argue that maybe you underestimated your opponent considering you been in more matches than he has and only pointing out his one loss to Hazard. He may have had more time to do his homework on you learningyour strenghts and weakness. honestly i would like to see a rematch between you because im anticapating a stronger re-match between you both.

for the record, i know some cats do a lot of "decorating" in they're verses i.e. colorful text, quoatations all over the place, etc. i have nothing against anyone who does that because this indeed is a "text battle" however, the fundamentals of emceeing must be kept true to it's nature as well. which would include presentation. obviously a better structured verse will always flow better just some words of wisdom. Another thing i don't think it's really helpful to explain some of your punches to the crowd. technically it's a way of swaying votes and not only that kills complexity. In a real live battle youw wouldn't be able to add in a explaination after your verse, but before anyone blows this up i will ditto that this is a "text battle" but as i also mention the fundamentals of emceeing must stay true to it's nature. nevertheless good match up.

[LunGzZ]

thanks for the vote. I have actually preached the expo part of your conversation to others. BUT I think an expo was needed in my case. That's something not every person in the world is going to know.

[-MenaCe-]

Modern Defiance:


I’ll make Lungz lunge miss and plunge like grappling-on-a-cliffs-edge
Lungzz is like a condom cause he’s only unraveling-on-a-dicks-head
-Ok Opener.. 6/10

his lungs have asthma so he’ll never see combat or be-a-veteran
plus ya tongue must be numb cause “Lung(zZ)” is a speech-impediment...
-Ok Line not that hard but decent..5/10

So ugly the only dimes you dropping is calls joking-wit-investigators
like a black out in a hospital I’ll have lungzZ choking-wit-respirators
-Ok..5/10

we already know lungzZ aint gangster so don’t bother-with-the-thug-text
an your families already ashamed of you your father-wants-a-blood-test
-LOL...thats funny shyt...8/10

you aint dope LungZz only gets progressively worse like emphysema
your punches fall short and too late like the man who invented-fema (F.E.M.A)
-Ok....6/10

I’ll puncture lungzZ Cause “Lawgix” already snatched-his-breath
Crush ya ribs through ya cause “Hazard” beat an smashed-ya-chest
-Ok Closer could have been better....6/10

Overall: 36/60

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LungzZ:


Gotta flow so tall that Osama would jet it, Strike with your fists and I’m katana protected!
My flows so hot caz it’s lava injected! Only time you see Mod earn/Modern victories when Obama’s elected!
-LMAO! Nice Opener....8/10

I got speed like a sonic track or greater, Straight drink out a tonic tap with chaser
This fag likes lockets, bags and sailors; So he’s a personal abuser, like chronic masturbators! OhHh
-LOL! Nice SHyt...8/10
Ay Mod, No one is stopping me hater! I’m killin you with word’s like talking is danger!
And You ain’t robbing me faker! Caz He couldn’t stand a chance, like bankrupt monopoly players!!!
-Good Set up but punch didn't land....5/10
Call me the army how I’m fearing gays! I got a leering gaze that’ll spear your face!
LunGzZ steer with haste! When punches land, Def will be hooked up to machines like hearing aids!
-Ok....7/10

This nigga gets served when my shoes stamp, He’s sad and sappy like a blues band;
Go for a punch and I shoot hands, LunGzZ got Defiance out of the question like a boot camp!!!!
-Nice.....7/10
The way I zoom I should be a photo…Me and sick go together like Z and Zoro
For votes he pleads it thorough caz this fag throws more links at us then Shigeru Miyamoto*!!!
-Ok Closer....6/10


Overall: 41/60



LungzZ Got this one with more consistant and hard hittin punches...


V/LungzZ

[eMCee Havic]

damn im the king of gettin knocked out

[LunGzZ]

Keep your head up bro. Just need the write guidance and you'll go far. Nice battle, lock it up.

[K KiLLaH]

3-0 Lungz -Closed n Updated-