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New Lil J Song Cry Remix
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Re: New Lil J Song Cry Remix
It was ok...
How old are you?
How old are you?
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Re: New Lil J Song Cry Remix
Oh cause you sound madd young..
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Re: New Lil J Song Cry Remix
damn menace..wussup nigga..you like lil boyz nigga? tsss...
sound like a fukkin predator mane, lol gotdamn
song was tight J
sound like a fukkin predator mane, lol gotdamn
song was tight J
Re: New Lil J Song Cry Remix
hott song but 20?!?!? put some bass in ya voice lil nigka 
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Re: New Lil J Song Cry Remix
yea I also look pretty young lol but thanks for the feedback
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Re: New Lil J Song Cry Remix
listening - your voice is really thin in addition to being kinda young sounding probably would sound better if you doubled the whole thing, first verse flow fell offbeat pretty bad whenever you switched tempos, 2nd verse you fell offbeat quite a bit in this, 3rd verse flow was better but you were behind the beat alot, delivery was pretty solid throughout and you weren't sounding like lil wayne on this which is a good thing but on this you fell offbeat alot imo this wasn't all that bad of a track but the verses need to be re-done cause the offbeat parts are really noticable and mess up the track
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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