Tellavision vs. Menace ( Menace wins by KO)

[Tellavision]

4 bars/8 lines
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check in and drop


check i'll go first

-- Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:55 pm --

emcee munch session bitch and im on a mission
just know your-in trouble like u got problems piss'n
see the difference is i flow, ya shit's plain as water
no justice, i just diss and leave the plantiff slaughter'd
in other words, Menace gett'n tamed like he some martyr
i mean damn, I though a pussy would make me cum harder?
four wins and five loss now dunny think'n he a tough vet?
still...this kid "post weak" like he "Spudd Webb"


enough said...

[-MenaCe-]

Listen!

The thing i Plan Doin is killin this Man Fluent on a Rampage..
Leave him in rare fraim T.ell im killin V.ision like im battlin his Last Name!!..

Wit no strain and no force im gonna treat him real Delicate..
Watch his words get "pierced" so severe on some Celtics Shit!!..

Buckets all day full force on his court if you the boss Practice What You Preech..
But believe wit his "gay" drops TV will only be queer passion closed Caption on a Beach!!..

So next time think twice before you try to grow some Balls and Courage..
And take Caution of It that you and illest just got Divorced In Public!!.. ITS OVER!!



Uppin!!

[sceritz]

Tella's Spitz

emcee munch session bitch and im on a mission
just know your-in trouble like u got problems piss'n
Weak Opener IMO, sort of a punch though.


see the difference is i flow, ya shit's plain as water
no justice, i just diss and leave the plantiff slaughter'd
meh... weak...

in other words, Menace gett'n tamed like he some martyr
i mean damn, I though a pussy would make me cum harder?
don't see how the first part makes sense, ok punch on the next part though

four wins and five loss now dunny think'n he a tough vet?
still...this kid "post weak" like he "Spudd Webb"
ok better then most, but still iffy

Menace's dropz

The thing i Plan Doin is killin this Man Fluent on a Rampage..
Leave him in rare fraim T.ell im killin V.ision like im battlin his Last Name!!..
ok.. stretch but decent

Wit no strain and no force im gonna treat him real Delicate..
Watch his words get "pierced" so severe on some Celtics Shit!!..
haha... ok i liked that one, pretty nice

Buckets all day full force on his court if you the boss Practice What You Preech..
But believe wit his "gay" drops TV will only be queer passion closed Caption on a Beach!!..
lol hard to understand but pretty nice


So next time think twice before you try to grow some Balls and Courage..
And take Caution of It that you and illest just got Divorced In Public!!
haha ok this one was aight, not too great, but aight


Tellavision, you're too simple you gotta put some more thought in the metaphors, and don't be scared to elaborate on the flow a little, especially in texting, more room to do that. and you had ZERO multies... fix that problem. Decent flow though, even if simple. Keep at it, you'll get better the more you flow

Menace, I see you have a bit of structure in you flow but you can throw more multies in their and take the time to think of different words that work more directly with the others... you want it to flow off the tongue perfectly if you are speaking it, nice flow though, ok punches, keep workin' at em.

OK decent battle, both need some work but we are all learnin'

v/ Menace.

[Deciple]

8 lines aint really much of a battle but im liking how when you read TV lines its easy to flow with but Menace had more punches which is crucial. i would like to see more dissin.. i mean you had your moments but in a battle you want the audiance to freak out on what you dissed like after every bar. i didnt get that vibe at all.. But if i had to vote which thats why im here i would give it to Menace.

My opinion text battle is just a waste of time. I know im a noobie to this and i dont freestyle or battle at all but text battle. can be written by a 5 year old and pwn some kid.

Menace for Me

~~Deciple~~

[-MenaCe-]

2-0 Uppin!

[Dead Silence]

wow
cat sweep/Menance

tellavison
that was terrible

-Closed and Updated-

[Haz]

Explain Your Vote...

[-MenaCe-]

Close This!

[Tellavision]

Explain Your Vote...

nah it's straight...i don't sweat over a vote if they ain't feel'n it they ain't feel'n whether it's a honest vote or not...i'll take the lost though but i think my verse was alot bettr than it was made out to be...it's w/e tho this is why i normally just stick to doing audio...

[-MenaCe-]

I thought it was gonna be closer then it was also...

Good Battle TV...

[Tellavision]

like was family....i'll see you in the Battle league tho yall can close this

[complexity]

-records updated-

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